hourglass
passage of time
your arms wrapped around mine
lost in the moment we collapse
freedom
passage of time
your arms wrapped around mine
lost in the moment we collapse
freedom
dreaming
time is always now
transcending dimensions
in a burst of light colliding
we fuse
time is always now
transcending dimensions
in a burst of light colliding
we fuse
posted for dVerse hosted by Mary writing about time..
time is always now - love that! K
ReplyDeleteTime is indeed now..thanks
DeleteLove does transcend time and all dimensions, I think. Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteHi Jeff, love and dreams can transcend time..I believe that to be true..
DeleteDreaming time is always now....I like this idea. We have to appreciate those dreams when we can as long as we can!
ReplyDeleteI agree Mary, dreams are the keys to living now..thanks for the prompt.
DeleteTime is always now, I love that ~
ReplyDeleteNo better time than the here and now..
DeleteGreat use of the shape, Truedessa! You have captured that precious moment perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriella..hold on to the moments
DeleteSuch a fusion is what all strive for, and all sure hope for an encore. Lost in that one moment makes all worthwhile. A great tune too.
ReplyDeleteI agree lost in that one moment
Deleteof complete happiness makes
the journey worthwhile step by step
that's the best way of getting lost...in the moment with a loved one...nice
ReplyDeleteLost in the moments of life can be a good thing...hope you are having a good week.
DeleteI like that precious moment transcending time....
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading
DeleteA very sensuous way to respond to this prompt. All we need is a loving moment to transcend time, to collapse into freedom, dreaming. This is lovely.
ReplyDeleteHi Myrna
DeleteThanks for reading..I guess I am just a romantic..
In some moments we need to be lost.
ReplyDeleteThat is true some moments are meant to be lost in..
DeleteI like the artistic flourish in the presentation of the poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mark..
DeleteThose are some wonderful moments to get lost in, aren't they?
ReplyDeleteI agree I hope you experience moment like these with your special lady..
DeleteThis poem brings to mind every time I hug/hold my wife. I am "Lost In A Moment" for every hug we have. And they are beautiful moments, just like this poem beautiful because it evokes memories like that.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy those moments they are special..hug each day ..
DeleteThe freedom of getting lost in a moment! A lovely take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank you freedom is a good feeling
DeleteOh, so fluid and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind to say so.. Thank you
DeleteYou live in the golden time of love. May it last forever, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry ..
DeleteI love how you replicated the shape of an hourglass for this, Truedessa, and the image of the arms wrapped around us.
ReplyDeleteThank you Victoria may we all know special moments in time
DeleteSo true, dreams do transcend all dimensions. I like the idea of becoming lost in time with a lover too...ah...yes. And love that great Cyndi Lauper song!
ReplyDeleteI do enjoy a good dream and the video conveys so much..thanks for visiting
DeleteI loved the third and fourth lines Trudessa, that concept of holding a beautiful moment forever. So nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you hold on..
Deletethe first part presents me with a very interesting visual of me and sand passing through an hourglass. we often forget time is now...to focused on what is to come. an enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteTime is always happening
DeleteVery cool....love C. L. anytime!
ReplyDeleteThank you
Deletei love how you float here...very vivid!
ReplyDeleteFloating can be fun.. Thank you
DeleteThe hour glass… I have a few on my desk - they fascinate me - I often turn them before they run out - but life isn't like that, is it?
ReplyDeleteThat is interesting that you have hourglasses on your desk. I think it would be fun to ponder as the sand gently flows.
Deletelove that first bit on the hourglass...and the arm in arm how we at times can transcend those notions we have of time.....
ReplyDeleteTranscending time can be a wonderful thing..
DeleteTime isn't a rock,
ReplyDeleteA grain of sand... It's us.
How did I miss this one???
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