Do you hear that sound
calling me when I sleep
speaking in a tongue
from ancient drums
whispers of the wind
Do you hear that sound
calling me to awaken
growling bear from the north
battling snowy skies
whispers of the wind
Do you hear that sound
calling me to open my ears
panther from the west
prowling across the land
whispers of the wind
Do you hear that sound
calling me to open my eyes
moose travels from the east
swift hooves, a
breath away
whispers of the wind
Do you hear that sound
calling my soul to arise
brown eyed fawn from the south
summoning summer gentleness
whispers of the wind
posted for dVerse writing about wind
based on the legend of how the winds
were named.
I like the repetition of the beginning and ending of each verse and the animals associated with the directions. The fawn summoning the soul...that is just so lovely. And anyone who has looked into those innocent eyes knows it is so. Hayes Spencer is Kanzensakura
ReplyDeleteLoved the flow of animals - they carried well with the wind theme... This totally made me think of "Four Winds" by Bright Eyes... don't know if you're familiar with that band...
ReplyDeletespeaking in a tongue
from ancient drums
whispers of the wind... excellent...
the repetition is very powerful with each stanza as well :)
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ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
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Love how the animals weaved in each of your stanzas ~ I find legends of the wind very fascinating ~ Thanks for linking up Truedessa ~
ReplyDeleteNaming the four winds - I get it! Very clever.
ReplyDeleteThis was fascinating, Truedessa. I really enjoyed learning about this legend.
ReplyDeletethe repetition works very well here and gives it a nice intensity... the moose traveles..the sound of hooves.. really cool
ReplyDeleteOh I love your names for the winds - and that they are the animals of the forests just gives this such a timeless quality. The brown eyed fawn stanza is just beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing this!
ReplyDeleteawesome...
ReplyDeletepanther from the west, prowl across the land....nice description in that and in how you tie the wind to the drums as well...made me think of that song colors of the wind as well..
ReplyDeleteOh I love these different voices of the wind.. I would love that fawn to come soon.. They each have their different voice and totem...
ReplyDeleteyou set the tone in the first stanza, and I was listening intently :)
ReplyDeleteThe wind sure has different voices for each name. Never knew there was such a legend.
ReplyDeletelooks like a nancient lore is being told, lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition of the line "whispers of the wind" at the end of each stanza, and the progression from sleep to being truly awake and alive. Peace, Linda
ReplyDeleteso liked the journey of this ancient wind... lovely tale
ReplyDeleteI like this. The repetitive line gives it a sense of mystery and your images definitely paint a picture in our minds. Nice!
ReplyDeletea moose with swift hooves :)
ReplyDeleteI hear ya, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteI knew you would..
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