 |
| free images |
I'm feelin' in a blue sort of mood
this heart of mine has come unglued
raindrops slippin' down windowpanes
listenin' to songs, weeping refrains
some days
you just need solitude
I'm feelin' in a blue sort of mood
dreamin' of a romantic interlude
raindrops slippin' down windowpanes
listenin' to songs, weeping refrains
some
days you just feel the rain
some
days you just feel the rain
some
days you just feel the rain
some
days you just feel the pain
I'm feelin' in a blue sort of mood
falling leaves, winter's prelude
raindrops slippin' down windowpanes
listenin' to songs, weeping refrains
some
days you just need solitude
I'm feelin' in a blue sort of mood
autumn's splendor seems subdued
raindrops slippin' down windowpanes
listenin' to songs, weeping
refrains
some
days you just feel the rain
some
days you just feel the pain
some
days you just feel the pain
some
days you just feel the pain
Just amazing poetry as always. I like the way you have intertwined different seasons with human moods. May I know if this any poetry from, will love to try it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely song you have written here:)
ReplyDeleteI agree that this is a song! I read it while the gentle morning rain is on my windowpane and I feel rain deep in my heart. Wow!
ReplyDeleteI want to sing this one!!
ReplyDeleteI love your song! Very magical and fits your page's ongoing theme! Great write! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThe pain sure can show, but let it flow and you just never know.
ReplyDeleteYes, some days are like that.......this poem would make a good song..........
ReplyDeleteThere must be music to go with these lyrics!
ReplyDeleteThose would make some really great song lyrics!
ReplyDeleteLove your song from a heart feeling a little blue!
ReplyDeleteYes, like so many have spoken this is like a song. A beautiful song of the blues. Lovely writing Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThis seems almost like the lyrics of a song. Just went back and read the comments, and I'm not the only one! Do you have music for it??
ReplyDeletesome days you just need solitude True I feel you Love it
ReplyDeleteluv your form, feelings and rhythm Truedessa, a really delightful read
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Some days all one has left is solitude. Such a striking poem, and well written. Greetings to you and hope you are doing great.
ReplyDeleteI feel like singing your poem! The pain sounds dificult but delicious?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Somebody, please put a jazzy melody to this. :-)
ReplyDelete~Imelda
Wonderful as always, and for my birthday no less. Good catching up with you again! :)
ReplyDeleteWoW these words sing to me, wonderful *smiles* though I too feel 'in a blue sort of mood'
ReplyDeleteHi True,
ReplyDeleteEmotive and thoughtful prose. Feel the rain and let it immerse you with cleansing thoughts.
Gary
Definitely imagined this as a song. I'm thinking a soft piano to go along with a light acoustic guitar.
ReplyDeleteThis really is a wonderful, wonderful poem! It has a folk song sort of quality. It deserves to be set to music.
ReplyDelete