Follow me into the night
I wanna take it down a notch
sipping in the moments
tuning into the
songs of
you and I...
sunlight dips below the horizon
fleeting color of dusk, fades away
Let's take it slow, moving
to the melody of our
soul....down by the river
we can star watch...
you and I...
Be a reality in my
dreams
or be my dream reality
beyond the hazy
moon
I see a place for
you and I
Follow me into the light
I wanna take it up a notch
filling the deep void within
touching flesh to flesh
tuning into the songs of
you and I
moonlight rises above the earth
illuminating orb of argent-silver
Let's take it slow, moving
in rhythm to the poetry
of our heart...sailing
down the mystical river
the point of no return
you and I
Be a reality in my
dreams
or be my dream reality
beyond the hazy
moon
I see a place for
you and I
author's note: I attended a
music-fest. The sun setting
in front of me and the moon
rising behind me (sigh)
A perfect setting for a
poetic dreamscape.
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author's note: I attended a
music-fest. The sun setting
in front of me and the moon
rising behind me (sigh)
A perfect setting for a
poetic dreamscape.
sharing with Poets United
Thank you for your visit!
Sharing with dVerse
Open link night
Your emotions for the love flow effortlessly...beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteIt is a beautiful thing when two are "tuning into the songs of you and I." Faintly, I remember, lol.
ReplyDeleteThe tuning in or two, from down a notch to up a notch, all together as one.
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DeleteBe my dream reality - nice!
ReplyDeleteI like "reality in dreams or dream reality." My husband and I got married when the sun and moon were in the sky across from each other like lovers.
ReplyDeleteSigh...sounds like it was beautiful and so are your words.
ReplyDeleteI love that you went to that concert because it gave rise to this lovely poem. So dreamy, I wanted to fall into it.
ReplyDeleteLove the images herein, particularly the chorus of dream/reality. :)
ReplyDeleteOh gosh this is stunning!💖 Especially love; "Let's take it slow, moving to the melody of our soul....down by the river we can star watch... you and I..."😊
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Truedessa. So very sensual and melodic. I really liked the repetition you used as well...which really helped to enhance the mood!
ReplyDeleteThat's a clever way of giving
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which is indicative of good thinking
Nice being here, True Ma'am!
Hank
And indeed, this poem is full of music – as well as lovely visual images and sweet emotion.
ReplyDeleteI trust you were making beautiful music with someone down by the river:)
ReplyDeleteLove the interplay of authentic conversational refrains here:
ReplyDelete'I wanna take it up a notch'
'Let's take it slow'
'you and I'
pinned against:
'sunlight dips' … 'moonlight rises' ~ sigh ~
A lovely piece ... wonderfully, romantically sketched.
i am glad the music-fest inspired such a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletelovely imagery and emotion filled. a delight to read. :)
There is nothing quite so inspirational as having a relationship with someone so that poetry flows from your lips to them and us as well!
ReplyDeleteLovely poetic dreamscape.
ReplyDeleteEspecially liked these words:
"Let's take it slow, moving
to the melody of our
soul....down by the river
we can star watch...
you and I..."
Might you add a tag to dVerse, please?
It has been added, so sorry! Thanks for hosting
Deletebeautiful poem...flows like a song!
ReplyDeleteYou write dreamscape so well...makes me want to be younger again. Or maybe not!
ReplyDeleteI love the title and the different scenarios of being "you and I"...very romantic and sweet. I've been at the beach before with the moon coming up over the horizon while the sun set behind me and it's just an awesome feeling.
ReplyDeleteI like the alternating contrast in tone.
ReplyDeleteWhen you say you wrote it at a music festival, I thought of Talking Heads song, Take me to the river as I read your poem. There's a lyrical, mystical feel to it.
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