Thursday, May 30, 2013

Riding High - The Mag



I'm going to  ride, ride, ride
with my head held high

I'm chasing a golden sun
roaring thunder in  a dark sky
riding the white tail of the mare
crystal teardrops fall from my eyes
a distant storm, silent prayer

ancient  dwellers playing drums
grasping  the reins bareback I fly
wild spirit, fast & furious on a dare
meeting  my warrior within the storm's eye
high winds roar, wispy trails of love beware

filled with grace, heaven hums
beyond the clouds our wills comply
embracing feather light, we share
love so rich and deep, we sigh
melting in a piece of golden sun

We're going to ride, ride , ride
with our heads held high

22 comments:

  1. This is so free and passionate love it!

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  2. I like the energy in your poem - "wild spirit, fast & furious"

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    1. Thank you so much..I am glad you could feel the energy.

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  3. Damn you are going to ride you say?
    Right across the bay?
    with that Jack Sparrow fellow right?
    Have fun as you take flight
    Really go go go
    This one at your show

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    1. Hi Pat,

      I'm going to ride ride ride
      with my head held high
      but, not with Jack Sparrow (lol)
      I'm ready to go go go
      care to come along...

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    2. If going to Bora Bora I will come
      And even bring the rum
      Has to be some place nice
      And at a cheap price haha

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    3. I knew it! That online course has made him rich!
      And now he's leaving us be in our fantasy ditch
      'Going to Bora Bora, bringing the rum,'
      That Cat is a millionaire and I am a bum
      But at least there's some game I can play at my fjord
      It's called the real Blogger Board
      Dicing my way to Bora Bora too
      So I'll meet you up there (It is I, Grumpy Goo)
      And you'd better not dirty that sand with your cat poo
      Cat litter? Use glitter or precious little stones
      Like Jack who saw pirates and skeleton bones
      Ride ride ride Truedessa and don't you even care
      About Cat and Grumps in our superhero underwear. ;)

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    4. @Blue - Did you make a real game from Blogger Board
      how fun would that be at anyone's sea
      You know I care about the cat and Grumps
      and of course Pat Hatt at his flat

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    5. thebluegrumpster@gmail.com
      I'll send you a picture. Pat's already seen it.

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  4. nice...love the freedom i feel in this...def with the touch of the riding bareback which always makes me feel all the more free...fun, lyrical piece...like the sounds it makes...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Thanks for the lovely note.

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  5. I can almost feel the wind blowing my hair in the breeze :)

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    1. Thank you for the read and reply.

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  6. Love the feel of this, lovely!

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  7. Such a positive determination despite life's unsureties.

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    1. Helena,

      Thank you, where there is determination there is hope.

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