Under the black
canopy of night
apparitions beckon to be heard
arise my friend, let your spirit take flight
beyond the
portal, on the wings of a bird
slipping through
the foggy mist
ancient water
drums, beating strong
dreamway, where
we can co-exist
turtle rattles
shake , playing their songs
full moon illuminates the shadows
hidden within the
forest canvas
spirit dwellers
lost in quiet swallows
eerie silence,
caught in the hands of madness
behold the path to
transformation
moccasins are worn but, know the way
lanterns planted
on the tree's foundation
capturing the magical
wonder on display
walking firmly on
the path, spirits guide
wolves hidden, outstretched branches
dark knowing
eyes, deep howling cries
alpha and
omega united forces
when wolves cry,
the earth quakes
fear not the
journey, the quest is at hand
time of transition,
changing shapes
leading lost souls
to the promised land
Author's note: The challenge set before us was to observe the ambiance (mood, character, quality,
tone atmosphere) of a drawing you choose and write a poetry response in
any which way you please. This is my take on what I saw within the landscape of my mind. The picture was a true inspiration.
Brilliant! loved the way you walked through the path. every bit of the pic is here!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the lovely comment. It is appreciated always.
DeleteBut the journey sounds scary to me
ReplyDeleteMight make the kitty flee
That is a good idea I just had
The cat will send a flea to the scary pad
Then if he comes back
The cat will attack
If not though
You journey alone at your show haha
The journey can be a bit scary
Deleteas you face the darkness
that cat is always up to mischief
but, cats are mysterious and should
embrace the journey..for who knows
what he will behold, in the lantern of night
Something to Ponder Pat and his cat..
True who knows indeed
DeleteWill always be the same at our feed
If we don't get off our rump
An go over the scary hump
I liked the tone you set for your poem, I also liked its beat.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for feeling the tone and beat within the piece. Nice to see you here.
DeleteVery visual and in sync with that dark tunnel pictured, where the spirit often walks.
ReplyDeleteThat tunnel lured me when I first caught a glimpse of the picture. It spoke directly to me. A nice prompt.
Deletefear not the journey...true that...its where the fun is...and the dark and light both play into it...i like the spirit guides in it as well..you capture well the feel of the pic...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteThanks for stopping over for a read and the nice comment. The journey to explore the many facets of life will always call me. Have a great weekend.
You definitely caught the spirit of the picture, those truths that live in the shadows, that are revealed with just a little light. I like the working in of the idea of transition in the last stanza. It brings the process to a near completion. Cool
ReplyDeleteHi,
DeleteNice to see you today. Thanks so much for leaving a comment regarding my work. Have a lovely Saturday!
Even when there is a canopy of night, those spirit guides are there to lead us. A beautifully expressed piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary,
DeleteNice to see you here today and thanks for the comment. The canopy of night is always inspiring. Have a nice weekend.
Under the black canopy of night...
ReplyDeleteI can see how the picture took you on this journey, thankfully with the help of spirit guides.
Hello,
DeleteThank you for coming over to read and the reply. Spirit guides are always full of wisdom and they seem to guide the pen at times.
How gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI like the call to the ancient days, where the spirit dwells, and walks firmly in unity with all ~ Love the message and the awakening of the spirit guides ~
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
DeleteThanks you! I hope you have a lovely weekend.
I love the native american, spiritual feel of this poem.
ReplyDeleteHelen,
DeleteThanks for the read and reply. I often hear the drums of ancient days.
Such a rooted rich spirit filled feeling throughout this piece. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteHannah,
DeleteThank you for generous reply.
I love how you used your rhyme scheme to such great effect! This sounds like it could be an ancient chant.
ReplyDeleteThank you for feeling the rhythm I often meditate as it brings me to a place of peace. Enjoy your day...
Deletewhen wolves cry, the earth quakes
ReplyDeletefear not the journey...that for me was the heart of it...very cool
Good Evening,
DeleteThanks so much! I am glad you could hear the heartbeat within the lines.