Tuesday, March 11, 2014

He Loves Me

photo by Shanyn 















in blades of grass daisies sway
under wings of a blue jay sky
fresh scent nature's bouquet
spring breeze a lover's high
plucking petals, he loves me
 


posting for dVerse writing micro poetry/macro photography
photo taken from Shanyn's album..I just adore daisies..

49 comments:

  1. sweet...though I wonder how many flowers she went through to get the desired result. precious piece...makes me wish for spring to finally spring forth.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hello,

      Daisies are beautiful growing in the wild..how I wish for spring as well..

      Delete
  2. ah...spring will def make you high...
    and i love daisies...sad too many fall
    in our quest for love you know..ha.
    hope it ends on the right answer.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I think spring is on my mind as winter has
      been long and cold...the quest for love is
      one we all venture on...

      Delete
  3. Fresh daisies embody the hope of spring and quest for love!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hope for fresh adventures in the journey of life..

      Delete
  4. such a beautiful poem,speaking of a heart's desire

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for your lovely comment..

      Delete
  5. So nice and neat [as in 'tidy']
    Love the 'blue jay' sky.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Aprille too bad love isn't tidy....thanks for visiting..

      Delete
  6. I can never resist a field of daisies, either making chains or chanting 'a lot, a little, passionately, not at all' (he loves me). You capture so well that joyous feeling they give!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Daisies hold a natural beauty as we wonder does he love me or does he not..the mystery unfolds with each petal plucked..smiling..

      Delete
  7. Hopefully he does, smiles ~ Loving the romantic micro poem ~

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Grace..I guess it depends on the flower..

      Delete
  8. And if he doesn't, you find a new daisy!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. in a field of wildflowers there must be one that does...

      Delete
  9. Ah I loved this. Brought back memories of when I used to do this to daisy petals dreaming of my first girlfriend lol

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Good Morning Keith,

      I think we all have dreamy memories of plucking petals to find the hidden answer..lol..but, then I'm a romantic at heart so I would probably have the urge to do this today..smiling..

      Delete
  10. i enjoyed how you ended this... plucking petals... oh, if spring would soon come... everything is so behind under piles of snow... though I did hear a few geese fly by yesterday

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It would be wonderful if spring would come soon..I'm tired of winter as well..

      Delete
  11. I really this poem which takes me back to these childhood times of plucking petals in spring meadows. Enjoyed the photo that you chose!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Mary..I saw the photo and knew this was the one I would write about.

      Delete
  12. Short and wonderful! :)

    ReplyDelete
  13. Daisies are a special flower...very Doris Day and "love" ;)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Daisies are indeed special..

      Delete
  14. Spring is the season of love daisies and he loves you...well bingo...you've won the prize:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. He loves me, he loves me not..depends on how you pick the flower I guess..

      Delete
  15. Pick and pull
    The field is full
    Then you find the one
    And love is given a run

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Out of the shadows
      & into the meadow
      plucking that special one
      under a glowing sun..

      Delete
  16. Plucking daisies is something we can all identify with. Very sweet closing line!

    ReplyDelete
  17. I have to say the daisy is right at the top of things that make me happy. Nice.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Victoria..a daisy is a natural wildflower..

      Delete
  18. They are the most cheerful of flowers...so free and easy. So glad he loves you...sweet.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for the lovely comment..

      Delete
  19. Daisies are truthful (or not).. but I do love them as they are so cheerful ...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Cheerful they are as they brighten any day..

      Delete
  20. Daisies are one of my favourite 'common or garden' flowers - a lovely description of what they can (or cannot) do for our hearts!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. A flower that dates back to earlier times, still holds
      beauty..it must have strong roots..

      Delete
  21. I love that you wrote about that photo. Nicely done micropoetry!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for hosting and sharing your amazing photo's. I was inspired by the daisies.

      Delete
  22. Beautiful, especially the blue jay sky!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Sherry,

      A blue jay sky is a lovely vision for sure..

      Delete
  23. So love that blue jay sky :)

    ReplyDelete