Friday, June 2, 2023

You and I (eye)

"Eyes Without Face" by Robin Isely (Muse #98)


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

in a room with a different view
walls colored with a melancholy hue
my heart softly sings the blues

how many eyes have been weeping
filling the chamber, with muted tones
while the world has been sleeping

art is about perspective, what do you see
tears of sorrow in the scope of my vision
can I ever be what you need  me to be

portraits of you, portraits of me
portraits of us and all the people in between
tears spill from the canvas of life

in a room with a different view
walls colored with a melancholy hue
my heart softly sings the blues

entering the doorway of perception
haunting images of  faceless cries
windows to the soul, our truest reflection

paper boats float in yesterday's streams
drowning in a river of unknown tears
dry your eyes, time to find new dreams

portraits of you, portraits of me
portraits of us and all the people  in between
tears spill from the canvas of life

Posted for The Sunday Muse
Thank you for visiting
May all your tears be tears of joy! 

17 comments:

  1. A heart that sings blue knows the score .....

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  2. Art is about perspective indeed, as is life. A great flow as the tears show.

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  3. So many missed opportunities and regrets - so many tears.

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  4. This reads like a beautiful blues song Truedessa yet it is deep with the questions we all ask. Truly lovely!

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  5. Portraits of us and the people in between... so nice.

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  6. This is such a beautiful response to that wall of weeping.

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  7. I like the in-between as it gives the reader something to wonder about. I used to have those, in my mind, some pretty sweet. They all went away now after I sat beside her the whole way through a granddaughter's wedding. I've not had those images since.
    This was a nice read, Good Job!!
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  8. Mesmerizing and haunting.

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  9. Art is about perspective... what are sad tears to one may be happy tears to another. I like how not just the art but the room has been incorporated. It becomes all encompassing.

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  10. I feel that the world is so filled with sorrow... so many spaces between people.

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  11. Hi Truedessa - loved this ... so revealing when we consider things. Wonderful take on looking at things from all points of view ... 'haunting images of faceless cries' - this phrase rang out ... so many haunting cries today. Take care - Hilary

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  12. "how many eyes have been weeping
    filling the chamber, with muted tones
    while the world has been sleeping"
    Neat, under the title "you and eye" to lose the distinction between speaker and addressee. I like the doors and windows to different perceptions.

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  13. That was awesome! Do you know I didn't realize all of the pics were of women's eyes? Don't know how I missed that.

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  14. I always loved this poem Truedessa, the message the word craft and the beautiful feelings it holds. I have been so grateful to have you at the Muse my friend. You are an amazing poet and soul. 💙

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  15. AnonymousJune 05, 2023

    More lovely prose. I especially liked 'tear spill from the canvas of life'.

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