The Sunday Muse Prompt |
I
once
stood tall
a symbol of wisdom
expanding consciousness
living, breathing and giving
my roots dug deep into the rich earth
my crown always reaching towards light
my limbs sprouting to the beat of nature's song
often, I'd whisper ancient secrets into listening ears
the birds came in pairs nested in between my loving limbs
growing in splendor between the earthly and heavenly realms
then, the day of darkness came, cutting pieces of me one by one
your red axe heavy, hitting me hard, I cried silently in pain
YOU swung and swung until there was nothing left
putting your axe down leaving your mark
in the stump of what once was
called
my
s
t
o
r
y
of
life
linking with The Sunday Muse
sharing with earthweal
May your inner tree always grow towards the light
Thank you for visiting
When I see a tree that's known to be old, I always think of the things it has seen and the stories it might tell. Cutting down a tree is like cutting off a bit of history. Your poem is beautifully rendered and beautifully presented.
ReplyDeleteBev, I agree, often when I am walking around the tall trees I wonder what they have seen and heard in the rings of time.
DeleteYou made a tree!! I love, love it! The tree and poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen, a shape poem. I haven't done one of these in a long time. It looks a bit off on my phone but, I just turn my phone around and all is well.
DeleteI really felt this poem - and love that it is in the shape of a tree, which makes us feel it even more.
ReplyDeleteA tree to replace the stump of what once was.
DeleteYou have beautiful and poetically spoken for the magnificence of trees! This is moving and lovely Truedessa! (The fact that you shaped it into the form of a tree is wonderful!!)
ReplyDeleteCarrie, thank you so much for hosting and being a wonderful force in the community.
DeleteTrees are such interestinh creations and your poem renders these aspects well
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog today
Much love...
Thanks Gillena...mush love back at ya...
DeleteGreat tree shape poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks it was fun to create.
DeleteI like your shape form.
ReplyDeleteBut I really got a twinge of bad when you started "the day" episode. I do feel though that God made trees and other plants without feelings as he planned for humans to use them as support commodities, like eating and fires. Some folks do think they have feelings, brains, etc. I don't but I glibly join in, and enjoy, calling dead trees not fallen "Zombie trees." I have posted my favorite Zombie tree on this blog and several more on my other active blog.
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Hmm I think all living things have energy , therefore,are connective. Perhaps, not a brain but, they have the capability to adapt and respond to their surroundings.
DeleteI had a houseplant that wasn’t doing well and I started talking to it and you know what? It perked up. Coincidence or something more?
We all enjoy the benefits of wood in our homes and lives. I just wonder why we need to take more than we really need.
Thanks Jim for your thought provoking comment.
Have a peaceful week..
I love the tree shape and the poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rall…
DeleteHeartbreaking. And sadly so very true, of our forests and of too many people too.
ReplyDeleteAmen, to that. Some people are takers and some are givers….and some don’t know when to put the axe down.
DeleteThank you for your insightfulness…wishing you a peaceful week!
Not only is it great, it's just amazing the form it takes. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex! I hope you have an amazing week, my friend.
DeleteHaving done(or rather, attempted) mine in the shape form also, I know just how difficult it is to get that perfect outline, and still keep your content relevant and sharp. You did an excellent job here, especially in the final words, which hit as hard as the axe in question. Really nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I wasn’t sure if I could pull it iff but, it was fun to do,
DeleteCreative and illuminating springs to my mind and you've highlighted and placed "nested" like it was a nest in the heart of the tree. We need to save trees now.
ReplyDeleteThank you for noticing the strategic nest, it would have to be in the heart of the tree.
DeleteTruedessa, I got goosebumps reading that last bit. A lovely shape poem with the nest in the center, protected.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting and commenting, much appreciated.
DeleteYou're welcome, Truedessa.
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