Friday, July 18, 2014

Knight's Garden
















morning  dew touches moist lips a  sweet  kiss
lost  in  lush  gardens, poets  dare  to  dream 
thick  maze  of  words ,  finding   heavenly   bliss 
dancing  under  sunlight, riding moon beams
  
pleasurable  rose  scent , magical  spell 
drifting  in  thoughts,  muse  of  lyrical  song
words   spoken  in tongue,  here our  spirit  dwells
with  you, I've  found  a  new  place  to  belong 

seeking   release  in a fountain of  love 
exploring the pathways  from  here  to  there 
syllables  take   flight  on  wings of a dove
supporting each other ,  showing  we  care 

in a knight's garden we discover art
singing to the rhythmic beat of our heart
 


posted for dVerse celebrating 3 years of poetry
at the Poet's Ball...A pleasure to attend ..
 
 

34 comments:

  1. Now that is sure a party to join in on indeed, own beat taking seed. A place to belong and a love that's strong, all one needs, well and maybe some dough to stay there haha

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    1. Everyone needs a place to belong in the garden I find peace, love
      and joy..a heart that beats stronger..

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  2. ah its all about exploring the lane between here and there and spinning it up in verse mazes we can make our way through and be delighted at what we find...thank you for adding your unique flavor to the mix truedessa...smiles.

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    1. It is about exploring in the journey of life..using the senses to find your way through the maze..thank you for all you do..you are a kind
      soul.

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  3. You write like a leaf on a lazy river - it flows most beautifully.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words..floating on a lazy river is most calming..

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  4. You have really set the scene well, Truedessa. The last couplet is really magical.

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    1. Mary,

      I want to thank you for all your support you are always around with a kind word. Peace to you..

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  5. I can smell these sweet roses too! Lovely poem and photo.

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    1. The smell of roses are delightful..inhale their beauty..

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  6. it's hard not to dream in such a magical place. I sure do like the idea of riding moonbeams. you paint a magical scene with your verse.

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    1. Thank you..to travel moonbeams I imagine it would be magical..

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  7. Thanks for taking us into the garden where again we find inspiration to write more poetry...your poem is lovely.

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    1. Thank you Kathy..the garden is so beautiful full of inspiration..

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  8. "I've found a new place to belong " and this is the joy of our life...a beautiful poem...

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    1. I think we all want a place to belong, a place to feel at home..thank you for reading.

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  9. ah i love it when syllables take flight - and even more in such an enchanting environment like that garden... a bit of magic in there..

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    1. I agree syllables in flight creating new works of art..thank you so much for all you do Claudia...it is a pleasure to be a part of the dVerse family.

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  10. Such a lovely sonnet and the ending couplet is just magical ~ You have captured the spirit of the pub & the poets who gather there ~

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    1. Thank you Grace..the pub is filled with wonderful friends and kind souls..

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  11. I thought I was the last to arrive to the ball! Thanks for linking in and giving us a chance to enjoy this very fine poem. Nicely done!

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    1. Thank you Jeff for visiting and welcome back to the pub..

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  12. Impressed with the message unhindered by the sonnet form. I was into the second stanza before I realized the form; a kudo for cleverness for sure. So lovely the fellowship we have nurtured, reaching to every quadrangle of this planet, & even cooler that so many of us want to sustain it year after year.

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    1. Hi Glenn,

      I think it is a lovely fellowship and I am glad to be a small part of the magic.

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  13. at least for me..to discover art..is to truly find love..and even GOD or Allitis..as some people term ALL to be as IS..

    And you bring those sentiments alive and well..here..

    as your poetry flows a love of life and art..

    As allitis to me..:)

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    1. Thank you for reading and I believe love is an art in the purest form.

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  14. I really enjoyed this Trudessa, such wonderful imagery, mouth watering in many ways topped off with a beautiful rhyming couplet. Well done.

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  15. There be magic, enchantment in your words that doth dance with glee. Thank you for sharing your wondrous talent to fill my eyes, my heart, my soul.

    A peaceful rest of your weekend, my kind friend.

    Gary :)

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    1. Hi Gary,

      Thank you for kindness and glad I could fill those spots..I hope you are doing well and the trail is being good to you my friend.

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  16. I love roses and this smell to roses:)

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    1. They are heavenly one can get lost in the scent.

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