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in silence secret wonders can be found
new beginnings, nature the catalyst
walking with ancestors on sacred ground
sharing with the birch, layers of my heart
lake waters offer cleansing for the soul
revealing rainbow skies, as clouds depart
the bark of the dragon making me whole
within deep waters paddling my canoe
discovering balance plays a key role
stroke by stroke, rippling reflections in view
seeking wisdom and destiny the goal
planting dreams watered by a sky fountain
in the heart of the red garnet mountain
sharing with Poets United...
honoring a dream...
Do you reckon the bark of the dragon could make me whole? How are you today?
ReplyDeleteIn some realms the birch tree is considered a white dragon capable of healing. How are you today?
DeleteTired (what's new) but fairly upbeat. But I've got so much work to do, it's like this dark cloud following me wherever I go. Do you know what I mean? That doesn't keep me from trying to outrun it though.
DeleteHa - I know that feeling tired..glad to hear you are staying upbeat. I do know about dark clouds, but I believe the clouds will pass and a blue sky will once again appear right before your eyes.
DeleteAlex tells me you rock. I told him all we need is a bit of roll, a Jungle Room and something to drink. Are you in?
DeleteHi Blue,
Deleteall we need is a bit or roll and then we can rock n' roll, the jungle room would be grand, paradise in another land..I'll take a cold drink and I am with you...I am in ;)
I was raised on rock, I got rhythm in my soul
I was born to love the beat, I was made for rock and roll
now who said that???
beautiful dedication in honour of a dream
ReplyDeletethank you...
DeleteA beautiful and peaceful dream - you needed one of those.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex, I did need one of those special dreams...
Deleteyou describe beautiful scenery, very pleasant dream.
ReplyDeleteThank you glad you enjoyed a dream..
DeleteSome lovely lines that ring authentic.
ReplyDeleteCome visit for inspirations!
ALOHA from Honolulu,
ComfortSpiral
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Thank Cloudia, I will head your way for inspiration..
DeleteI will soon bring out the kayak and yes the way you cut the water is a dream within..
ReplyDeleteI have never tried to kayak Bjorn, it looks like fun..
DeleteI love the picture and this poem....and the visions of this dreamland!
ReplyDeleteThank you I took this picture recently on a mountain retreat.
DeleteWhat an enjoyable poem. It is soothing and brings peace. Very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna - we can all use a little peace in our lives..
DeleteYou make me want to go out and enjoy the peaceful water of a lake. A very serene poem, Trudessa.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gabriella - there is something soothing about water..
Delete"planting dreams watered by a sky fountain" absolutely luv this line
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by my Sunday Lime today
much love...
Thank Gillena - and you are welcome I enjoy your poetry..
DeleteOh those closing lines are perfection!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry...always planting seeds for a better tomorrow..
DeleteThis poem gives me a very peaceful feeling, Truedessa! Love the idea of planting dreams watered by a sky fountain.
ReplyDeleteThank Mary...a drink from the fountain might be rather nice as well.
DeleteWatered by the sky as away dreams fly, sprout up and grow. Balance sure adds to the flow.
ReplyDeleteNeed balance to stay a float in the flow..
DeletePlanting dreams...what a wonderful image.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gail..
DeleteThat's beautiful. The last two lines are my favorite.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra..
Deletei agree, planting dreams is very intriguing
ReplyDeleteMy Brain is a Cheap Gadget That Spins
Planting dreams with the hopes they will grow..
DeleteSome beautiful, evocative lines in this piece with such a tranquil, restorative ambiance. Lovely lines of poetry that just transport the reader to a gentle place.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wendy, I actually sat on that bench and meditated for a bit.
DeleteI love the idea of sharing layers of your heart with the birch....there is no better place than nature to go to bare your soul for healing :-)
ReplyDeleteThat is true removing layers so one can feel free...
DeleteDo dragons bark? I always thought they roared...
ReplyDeleteI'm just kidding. I wanted to be able to say something more than just "this is beautiful and serenely peaceful." Which, it is.
haha - well in this case they bark...even though you can hear the roar of the white dragon if you are still...the goddess of the forest will awaken and open doorways to new beginnings..so it is said...
DeleteThank you for the smile...
I love the many layers of the birch - I always thought of her like pages of a book. Your poem is serene as you paddle forward planting dreams (listening intently for the bark of the dragon)
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Hi, yes her silken skin is perfect for writing on. I have written poems and intentions on peeled layers found on the ground. I wonder what her story would be.
Deleteit's quite a dream! Love your play with landscape, dragon and birch...also canoe trip might be exciting one! Keep those dream stored in journal...good one!
ReplyDeletethanks humbird, I journal all the time.
DeleteThere's a mountain lake in my life as well, one with a canoe and a childhood. That dream and the healing Dragon bark is wonderful, promising.
ReplyDeleteHi Susan, it is good that you have a mountain lake it can bring comfort.
DeleteWonderful imagery. .
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteYOU HAVE A nice blog dear
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Thank you Melody..
DeleteAnd from the view of upon the mountain ridge, I see a panoramic vision of that elusive dream that darts through the clouds.
ReplyDeleteCanoes and contentment
The words you sent.
Thank you, my lovely friend.
Gary
Gary my friend,
DeleteSo nice to see you at my place. Ah that elusive dream we continue to chase. How are you these days?
Glad you to have visited. Challenging myself because I cannot allow exhaustion to sabotage my right to a happy life.
DeleteDream on, my friend.
Gary
We all deserve to be happy..here is a smile :) just for you..
DeleteCongratulations on winning the you rock award! Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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