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peacefully resting dreams reborn
roots dug deep healing water flows
in a vast field wild heather grows
your song and light forever glows
tears of sorrow hearts gently mourn
in a vast field wild heather grows
peacefully resting dreams reborn
sharing with Poets United
wishing you peace in your new journey
my dreaming friend..you are not gone
just transformed.
I'm sorry you lost such a dear friend. She would be honored and touched by that poem.
ReplyDeletethank you Alex, I think she would smile..
DeleteIt is hard to lose a friend, but you have shared a beautiful poem in memory. I hope they are resting peacefully with good dreams.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary...
DeleteHope all went well at the service. A beautiful final testing place. Their song I am sure echoes ever on
ReplyDeleteI am sure her song will echo through time..
DeleteHeather is something that at least in Sweden has been associated with death.. and your triolet sings a song of real beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn...may her dreams carry on...
DeleteIt's so difficult to lose and to grieve a dear friend....feeling your grief through these words and wishing you comfort as you remember her song and light.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I appreciate the kind words..
DeleteOh I am so sorry for your loss of such a dear friend....but this is a lovely poem to remember them by....I love the images of this poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Donna,
DeleteI read your poem today..it was so uplifting...I needed that today..
My deepest condolences for your loss.. its difficult to go through a time like this.. this is a great tribute.. may the soul rest in peace...Amen.
ReplyDeleteAmen...let it be so...
DeleteSo comforting, wild heather, the hope of dreams reborn, and your words accompanying the poem - that your friend is not gone, just transformed. A very beautiful triolet.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry, thanks for visiting always wonderful to read your words.
DeleteA great tribute indeed for your friend and a new journey is born
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, a new journey is born..that has a lovely sound..
DeleteThe repetition is this lovely piece is haunting - true to the spirit of the content and annotation.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wendy..it was heartfelt..
Deletenow thank you for that nice and enchanting piece! it has truly livened up my Sunday evening. best regards!
ReplyDeleteSmiling thanks James..
DeleteA very beautiful poem, full of peace.
ReplyDeletePeace is all one can ask for in the journey...
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteI used to have a heather garden.
I am sure it was a lovely garden..
Deletethat reminds me of the heather i've seen in scotland - such beauty in an otherwise barren landscape... sorry for the loss of your friend but surely a beautiful tribute
ReplyDeleteThey are a beautiful flower when in bloom.
Deletethe spirit lives on. pain is felt in the loss by those who remain in the mundane. their soul probably does not
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and leaving a comment. It is appreciated.
DeleteFriends may leave us but there is always part of them talking to and laughing with us. We are not whole unless we have others still on our minds.
ReplyDeleteI believe we do carry pieces of those with us through the journey.
DeleteI love the rhythm in this piece...like a silent contemplation of al that matters
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae Rose..
DeleteThis was an absolutely beautiful tribute to your friend. Both of us send our condolences, and may you eventually find peace in this difficult time.
ReplyDeleteHey Guys, Thanks for your lovely comment.
DeleteLoss is never easy but I'm glad you have the talent to express your grief in such a beautiful way. Truly, may she rest in peace.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna...I am sure she would like this poem..
Deletebeautiful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
thank you..
Deleteaside from the beautiful poem, i like the snippets at the bottom part, being transformer to someone else. wow that's a unique way of describing someone's passing
ReplyDeleteThanks...I believe she has transformed..
DeleteA beautiful poem and a beautiful tribute.
ReplyDeleteThank you it means a lot
DeleteYour friend would've loved it.
ReplyDeleteI believe she would love it...
DeleteHear the sorrow in heather, mixing with wind, sad story, but peace embraced the memory of friend, still close, but transformed....~ evocative poem for me, recent loss.. just couldn't attend...too far xx
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear you too suffer a loss..may peace be with you as well..
DeleteHi Trudessa - this is lovely ... a true emotional feeling of place for your resting friend. I feel for you and for her family ... with thoughts - Hilary
ReplyDeleteThanks Hilary - never gone just transformed...
Deletethis is absolutely stunning. makes me want to wonder into the wilderness and just get lost for a while!
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