Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Swept Away

Charing Cross Road, 1937 by Wolfgang Suschitzky


rain
swept me away
at the crossroad
we met

drenched
we embraced
forever changed

author's note : trying a new form 

Septolet

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
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18 comments:

  1. Alex J. CavanaughJanuary 05, 2016

    You succeeded - I can see the picture!

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  2. klahanieJanuary 05, 2016

    Hey Truedessa,

    Well done and you just reminded me I've been to Charring Cross Road. Never heard of "Septolet." What with me being almost tired and it being three in the morning, I thought it read "Septic Toilet"! I'm kidding and good grief, Alex has already commented. Or, is it one of his clones!

    Take care, time for me to check my eyelids for cracks.

    Gary

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  3. GailJanuary 05, 2016

    Feels good.

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  4. Nuwan SJanuary 06, 2016

    short and sweet
    good luck Truedessa
    from - http://imagtalks.blogspot.com/

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  5. kaykualaJanuary 06, 2016

    Rain obviously brings good fortune and a wonderful relationship.Nice new form Truedessa.

    Hank

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  6. kaykualaJanuary 06, 2016

    Rain obviously brings good fortune and a wonderful relationship.Nice new form Truedessa.

    Hank

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  7. Pat HattJanuary 06, 2016

    A good drenching to come due, warm up even if cold at one's zoo

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  8. SandraJanuary 06, 2016

    oh...the rain !

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  9. HelenJanuary 06, 2016

    Oooooh, love this form .. Nice!

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  10. brudbergJanuary 06, 2016

    What a change... I think this is exactly how the world can change in an instant...

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  11. GraceJanuary 06, 2016

    Sharp and sweetly romantic ~

    Wishing you Happy New Year and all the best ~

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  12. Blue GrumpsterJanuary 07, 2016

    Good morning, True Blue
    Tell me, how are you?

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  13. Carrie Van HornJanuary 07, 2016

    Nice form Truedessa and softly romantic. :-)

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  14. Ankita January 08, 2016

    this new form rocks! your have done it really beautifully :)

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  15. Bekkie SanchezJanuary 08, 2016

    You taught me a new form! I love trying them thanks! I like it very much it's almost like a "list poem." Bravo!

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  16. David Powers KingJanuary 09, 2016

    Liking this new form. Well done. Happy New Year to you. :)

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  17. Helen Killeen Bauch McHargueJanuary 09, 2016

    Thanks for the new form.

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  18. BeateJanuary 10, 2016

    You did an amazing septet! :)
    And what a beautiful picture you created! I can see it and I love what I see :)
    Have a wonderful and relaxed Sunday!
    Lots of love and hugs to you,
    Beate

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