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Oh what a beautiful sky, crystal clear
half moon illuminating the heavens
Mars, Jupiter and Venus shine
seven stars offer the weary a drink
big dipper sparkles daring you to sip
quenching a never ending thirst
take thy cup drink in the magic
of night...
sighing...
Where o' where is my dragon
let us fly beyond the milky way
awaiting the blue planet of
Truemanticism
dancing to the frequency of love
unfurling wings we sweep the sky
don't cry little star your light forever
burns in the heart of the dragon
inhaling//exhaling...
in the breath of mystic night
take me to my place of heart
where the sky river runs between
heaven and earth...
a warrior calls out in the darkness
behold a dream!
author's note: I was stargazing the
other night and these words came
to me. I am giving honor to the
vision. It is a bit rough, but
I wanted it to be unpolished.
Thanks for reading...
sharing with Poets United
Beautifully penned, Truedessa. Dreamlike & ethereal, a relaxing poem to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, I am a dreamer believing in the bigger picture show.
DeletePerhaps like all shining stars to polish seems redundant - this sparkles and glows..such an honest song from the heart..long may you drink the magic of the night
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae Rose, I think I just wanted the stars to shine in their own light while my words float in the backdrop.
Deletei love "Truemanticism" :) a wonderful read...
ReplyDeletethanks - it is a word I coined
DeleteLittle star shall burn indeed as a dragon takes seed, oh what you can weave from a little star no so far.
ReplyDeletenot*
Deletecan't spell, what the hell lol
Hey Pat,
DeleteMuch can take seed from a little star..
its remarkable how nature inspires us with its majesty and wonder and splendour
ReplyDeleteThat is very true, I think one just needs to take a moment to enjoy the view.
DeleteNot rough at all! It captured your raw thoughts and emotions perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex, it was a magical night of wonder. The dragon is out there just waiting to speak.
DeleteI think it captured the stargazing perfectly - a delight to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn - I always wonder what life may be out there beyond the sparkling lights.
DeleteI adore the whole idea of a sky river running between heaven and earth. Mystical and uplifting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry, I think the river would be very inviting.
DeleteBeautifully written, Truedessa :D love the form.
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks Sanaa
DeleteOh yes this is beautiful...love it and am sighing...such a dream!
ReplyDeleteThanks Donna - sometimes the universe just speaks to us out of the darkness
DeleteHow nice, Truedessa, to ride your dragon, to sing the song, to be open to beauty of sky... ~ many thanks for visiting/reading!
ReplyDeleteHi Humbird - no need to thank me for visiting your blog I enjoy your poems and thoughts :)
DeleteTruedessa, I recommend you do more and more stargazing. It inspires such beautiful scenes, words, dreams. Lovely wrting which is like a little medicine for the soul.
ReplyDeleteHi Myrna - I think I will do just that as the heavens seem to have something to say and I would like to listen.
DeleteThe celestial visuals that you have created here are just stunning and works, so well, with the wonderful mystic/mythic images, throughout.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wendy - I hope you are doing better?
DeleteI especially like 'truemanticism'.
ReplyDeletehaha - me too my new favorite word, actually I wrote a short story and I have used my new coined word in it.
DeleteBeyond the milky way
ReplyDeleteYou say?
Can we fly today?
I'm ready Blue
Deletelet's take to the sky...
Okay :)
DeleteThis is a beautiful vision of the night sky.
ReplyDeleteHi Kerry,
DeleteIt was a stellar night...
Wow! Thank you for taking me along your magical journey. I soooo luv too the title of this poem.
ReplyDelete"truemanaticism" what a word
Happy you dropped in at my Sunday Lime this week
Much love...
You are welcome Gillena, thanks for taking the journey.
Delete"dancing to the frequency of love" What a wonderful line! Love its implications, its possibilities, the variety of its meanings.
ReplyDeleteHi Magaly - thanks, it is my motto "I Choose the Frequency of Love" so why not dance in it as well :)
DeleteGood ideas come from ordinary words. But they turn out brilliant given the right treatment by you True! Not rough at all!
ReplyDeleteHank
Some good ideas can bring about some words..
DeleteHey Truedessa,
ReplyDeleteOh my Gourd
I lean toward
The echoes of your frequency
It's plain to see
You tune into love
A welcoming glove
No your prose are not rough
I've said enough
Over to you
This be True.
Gary, Gary, nary contrary...
Haha Oh my ghourd you do have a sense of humor. How are you doing there across the sea?
DeleteStargazing makes for the most inspired prose. I love the ambiance of your words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal I will be adding your book to my reading list
DeleteThis is wonderful. I love the vividness of the description, and I love the word Truemanticism. I'm also pretty jealous that you live in an area where you can stargaze. With all of the city lights and pollution, let's just say we don't get much more than a blotchy black sky around here. :)
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks for visiting. I coined that word it is part of a bigger story. I have a good view on a clear night, but it is up on my beloved mountain that they truly shine.
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