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Mysteries of the universe
splash across a midnight sky
s(wishing) upon a star
swaying to the thump thump
of a drum...
whispering a tune between
snaps, crackles and pops
sweat trickles down my face
landing with a splat on parched
lips....
thoughts of you ping pong
against the chambers of my
heart...Lub Dub...Lub Dub..
vibrations rumble, rattling
gateways to unknown
worlds....
moon rose glows in a distant
sky..murmuring endless love
petals flutter, thorns slash
whispers of desire whoosh
across the heavens....
poofs of blue fire tango
shadow dancing...we
sizzle under the last sliver
of light...
written for dVerse
Onomatopoeia hosted
by Bjorn
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Luv your chock full of Onomatopoeia poem. Happy you dropped by my blog Trudessa
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Thank you Gillena - have a wonderful weekend
DeleteSuch a glorious mix of images and sounds. I love the moon rose glowing, and the gateways to unknown worlds.
ReplyDeleteSherry, there is a gateway somewhere waiting for you to discover.
DeleteNice job!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletethe moon and tears with the heart - bitter sweet sounds - beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThank you Gina bittersweet a rose is beautiful yet it has thorns.
DeleteHow magnificent is this?! I can see the swishes in the sky, feel the softly falling petal, feel the thorns draw blood, truly magnificent images *love*
ReplyDeleteHi Shadow, the swishes are there dancing beyond the clouds.
DeleteThanks for visiting
A lot of rhythm and sound with this one. Very descriptive!
ReplyDeleteHi Alex descriptive it is as each line comes to life. I still believe in dragons!
DeleteNice sound here: "moon rose glows in a distant
ReplyDeletesky..murmuring endless love"
Listening to the murmurs of a heart can be a nice sound indeed!
Delete“Poofs of blue fire tango”. I love this image, and the entire poem. So well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sara! The dance of flames can be alluring...
DeleteA strong romantic poetic that rocks the prompt. You had me at /poofs of blue fire tango?shadow dancing/. I enjoyed a slightly different flavor for you with this piece, yet gateways and portals and fantasy were still part of the wondrous mix.
ReplyDeleteHi Glenn
DeleteYou made me smile with your comment. I am always searching for those portals.
Thank you!
Oh... love the different sounds here.. it's like a symphony set to different movements I can feel.... from the rapidness to a the nice end in Adagio
ReplyDeleteBjorn thank you for the prompt A symphony, I like the sound of that;)
DeleteThe sounds sure shine through as the moon glows with the words from you.
ReplyDeleteShining bright into the night!
DeleteWow!! Truly WOW! This is breath taking!! You should publish a book with your writings! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteWow, thank you Stacey for the lovely compliment! It means a lot to me to know you enjoy my poetry.
DeleteStacy is right. It is breathtaking, True. She's also right about publishing a book:)
ReplyDeleteSandra - thank you for visiting, maybe some day I will publish!
DeleteYour words made me feel like you and I were on the same wavelength.
ReplyDeleteHi Silver! The same wavelength? Hmm that is interesting, could have been.
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