Sunday, August 12, 2018

Waves of Good-bye

Truedessa's collection

 every time you go away
waves of goodbye crash my soul
dreams wash away with the tide
my heart wonders why

8 comments:

  1. I know those waves of goodbye. Beautifully written, my friend. Goodbyes are painful. As I write this, I hear an eagle calling from the trees down the street.........perhaps a message.

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  2. With such a crash, can sure make goodbyes painful indeed.

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  3. Nice turn of a phrase, seeing how we often wave -- the other kind of "wave" -- when we say goodbye to someone.

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  4. Hi Truedessa - yes ... that desperate sadness on losing something or seeing someone go ... not easy - love the verse ... cheers Hilary

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  5. So sad! Beautifully written!

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  6. pain is gain of love!

    it is lovely!

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  7. Nicely written …

    All the best Jan

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