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In a ringed-sea; shines a sunless-gem
high tide-looped braided-ropes around
the crow's nest
moon-blown wind echoed with dark-
vowelled ghostly songs...
dust-tongued pirates searched for
the water-spoken tales of hidden treasures
stealing pieces of eight, walking the plank
under a pitch-black sky, he- bird sang
to she- bird of un-told riches for those
brave enough to sail the tear-culled waters
muffle-toed mariners deafen sounds
of lost souls, cradle-petals of black-rose
ravens, heaven-circling turbulent sea for those
bell-voiced believers in a diamond-clustered
sky..
written for dVerse
author's note: Somewhere out there
a pirate sails. This is dedicated to a certain Captain and crew!
Har- thanks for the good-times
Har- thanks for the good-times
Thanks for visiting I had a bit of fun with this one!
Wow! Your imagery and word choices in this poem took me onto the pirate ship, i almost heard the rattle of dubloons! Awesome writing! I especially like the black-rose ravens.
ReplyDeleteHi My Friend, Thanks for coming aboard.
Deleteoooooh. such an enchanting tale told through poetry!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I do enjoy a good tale.
DeleteYour poem is more haunting and beautiful than the image.
ReplyDeleteWho be the pirate?
Hi Alex, thanks for the visit. I hope you are writing.
Deleteyou surely sailed away with this prompt Trudessa - a treasure trove of your own word compounds mixed with Dylan Thomas'
ReplyDelete"the water-spoken tales of hidden treasures" - a lovely, lovely line. Thanks for joining in
Hi Laura, Thanks for hosting this delightful prompt.
DeleteAll those compound words slide in just right here! "tear-culled waters" was my favorite image.
ReplyDeleteHi, those words were fun to weave on this one!
DeleteQuite evocative. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ken!
DeleteOh I do remember the Pirate tales you used to share... wonderful and romantically dark ...
ReplyDeletehaha Bjorn - I did enjoy writing those magical tales.
DeleteYour tales of yore--was it Captain Pete? I, too, was hooked by your black rose ravens.
ReplyDeleteYou used these compound words with verve and boundless energy.
Hi Glenn, I will always treasure those moments on the high sea. I saw the words and I just had to weave one more.
DeleteFascinating, pirates, predators all have captains which command men and ships far from home.
ReplyDeleteLet’s hope all the captains are wise in their journeys.
DeleteI too remember your pirates tales. Delightful adventures....dream on.
ReplyDeleteI am forever s dreamer Grace
DeleteSo rich in imagery. Makes me wanna be a pirate! (Halloween is coming up.)
ReplyDeleteHaha well there you a pirate you will be matey!
DeleteGreat homage to captains.
ReplyDeleteSmiling, thanks for reading
DeleteLove the theme and the treatment! The sea's in our blood, you know... literally!
ReplyDeleteAye, it is true...
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