Sunday, November 6, 2022

The Final Hymn

Hymn Book

No one knows why the flock flew away
the only chorus heard now is the cooing
of homing pigeons, carrying notes
between the sky and earthly world

once there were songs that lifted the rafters
the old piano could be heard from far away
people came to dance and clap their hands
rejoicing in the harmony of the day

perhaps, too many dreams died and faith
drifted away with each broken heart
the road to love too difficult to travel
the music too painful to hear

light still shines through the stained glass
warming the emptiness felt deep inside
there are hymns of life waiting to be sung
if only the shadows of darkness would cease

perhaps, a broken hallelujah, is better than none 

written for The Sunday Muse 

 

10 comments:

  1. A broken hallelujah better than none ... breath caught in my throat.

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  2. I felt the same as Helen over that same line. This is a time of broken hallelujahs. This is a beautiful poem. As I read, I could see all the life the building had held, and thought the walls and floor and ceiling must hold all of those memories.

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  3. Wonderfully written True — loved the Leonard Cohen nod! 🙂✌🏼🕊❤️

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  4. Sadly they left, although God never left them. But when people lose hope, lose faith, they drift.

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  5. "a broken hallelujah, is better than none" - indeed.

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  6. "light still shines": the hope continues despite the darkness as do the hymns waiting to be sung. Lovely, T.

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  7. ", a broken hallelujah"
    Wow. This is powerful image Trudessa.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog.

    Much💛love

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  8. A poignant poem that carried right inside the empty church. Perfect.

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  9. This is gorgeous poetry Truedessa! You have captured a truth and loss so beautifully. I do hope that you are feeling better today my friend.

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