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| "Edge of a Dream" by Tom Chambers |
through a deserted village street
walking on the edge of a dream
in the wilderness, my heart beats
through a deserted village street
balance hinges on stable feet
in the darkness, tiger eyes gleam
through a deserted village street
walking on the edge of a dream
linking with the The Sunday Muse
Thank you for your visit!
Nice one. Dreams tend to make us quite daring ☺
ReplyDeleteMuch💛love
Dreams take us to places we wouldn’t travel in normal time. Happy Sunday to you!
DeleteThese lines move like a song. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis makes the heart move with it my friend! Beautiful writing Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThe repetitive lines lend themselves to a slow motion effect, just like a dream, surreal with an internal logic all its own which the rhymes express, conflating heart beats, village streets, and stable feet. Well done, T.!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dora, I am glad it conveyed dream qualities.
DeleteYes, it definitely has a dreamy feel to it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex, you know I am a big fan of dreams.
DeleteSometimes it's all you can do to hang on to the edge, until things come back into focus. I like how you took the title of the image and ran with it.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It was a great springboard.
DeleteYou're very welcome, Truedessa.
Delete"my heart beats
ReplyDeletethrough a deserted village street" - great feel to that.
Thanks! There is more transpiring than meets the eye.
DeleteMagical. Mystical. Beautiful - as dreams so often are.
ReplyDeleteThat they are! Thank you
DeleteGreat writing ... the repetition works beautifully here.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen
DeleteThis is beautiful, amplified by the repetition of the form.
ReplyDeleteThanks, my friend.
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