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into winter’s wonderland we are drawn
there is beauty in the new dawn
poetry scattered in morning frost
internal/external rhymes are lost
internal/external rhymes are lost
barren trees blanketed with ice
a crow searches for field mice
snowy owl swoops across the land
mystical sky low-laying clouds expand
written for dVerse
writing a 44 word quadrille - incorporating ice
author's note: I was driving through the mountains
and near the peak the trees were covered with ice
You Rhyme sooo good!! I love it. I too like the fallen snow, and ice is okay too. I've sledded the hills so very much in Nebraska. Played "Fox and Goose" to at school, recess and noon break. Be we hardly ever get any snow here in the Houston, TX, area.
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I think google doesn't like "too" but would rather change them to read "to".
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Thanks Jim, it sounds like you have fond memories of the snow. The ice can be dangerous for driving. The trees had snow but, it iced over . The mountains had a mystical feel, especially on the peak as the clouds were low and thick. Everything grey and white. I wondered where has all the color gone?
DeleteYou've rocked a great rhyme scheme yourself! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThanks, you rocked yours as well!
DeleteLovely scene. The ice prompt well fitted.
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Thanks Gillena! Have a great week !
DeleteLovely rhyming, Truedessa, and I love the ‘poetry scattered in morning frost’.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kim, I do enjoy a bit of rhyming.
DeleteThat has a really nice rhythm to it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex!
Deletepoetry scattered in morning frost...
ReplyDeleteI love this line.
I often love snow, and hope to get more of it later when we go to the mountains... on ski the snow is wonderful
ReplyDeleteI hope you get snow for skiing.
DeleteThose trees do look magical.
ReplyDeleteThat they do!
DeleteLove the idea of "poetry scattered in morning frost". I see I'm not the only one!
ReplyDeleteI am not sure who this is but, I thank you for visiting.
DeleteYou captured a frozen piece of time purrfectly.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra
DeleteBeautifully described. It must have looked amazing.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry, it was quite beautiful.
Deletewinter landscapes have that frozen snapshot look to them, yet as you show, life goes on... Nicely done, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThank you a piece of frozen time.
Delete"Poetry scattered in morning frost..." Love this.
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