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Beyond the stars she navigates the heavens
mapping pieces of their journey in her heart
once in a song, she heard love was a work of art
in lucid dreams she feels the aura of his presence
connecting dots, today, a new adventure starts
written for dVerse
hosted by De
writing a 44 word quadrille
incorporating a form of the word ‘map’
author's note: For a friend ...I hope you continue the story
Alex J Cavanaugh author of Dragon of the Stars
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Love this. I wish her well (upon one of those stars). :)
ReplyDeleteThank you hopefully the stars will align.
DeleteVery nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dwight! Have a wonderful day
Delete"the aura of his presence."
ReplyDelete- favorite line, connotes the mystery of memory and spirit.
Thank you for feeling the connection.
DeleteBravo!!!
ReplyDeleteMuchđź’–love
Thank you for your appreciation
Delete"once in a song, she heard love was a work of art"
ReplyDeleteshe took this advice, she began to sing once more . . .
I like it, she sets her sights high
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Thanks Jim I enjoyed your add on.
DeleteBeautiful, Truedessa, and I particularly love the lines:
ReplyDelete‘mapping pieces of their journey in her heart
once in a song, she heard love was a work of art’.
Thank you Kim! It do believe what I heard in a song..
DeleteA work of art, a continuing journey. . .what we make of dreams. This is lovely. I wish your friend well.
ReplyDeleteThank you Merril, its my hope he will write a short adventure in the stars.
DeleteOur maps are written as we go. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThat they are charting each adventure one step at a time.
DeleteConnecting dots, mapping pieces in a heart .... how lovely the thoughts, how lovely your quadrille. From Helen.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen, may you always follow the map of your heart.
DeleteThank you, Trudessa - hint taken!
ReplyDeleteThank you, for supporting my blog and writing.
DeleteYes... let adventure begin, the day will come
ReplyDeleteLet the adventures continue.
DeleteOoh, fascinating, romantic and mysterious!
ReplyDeleteGood comparison between love and art. Both spring from a creative energy and manifest a healing presence in our being.
ReplyDeleteAnd may it be a good one. Love this part: love was a work of art.
ReplyDeleteLuv it. Hello, True. How are you?
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