Monday, May 1, 2023

Mapping the Heart

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Beyond the stars she navigates the heavens
mapping pieces of their journey in her heart
once in a song, she heard love was a work of art
in lucid dreams she feels the aura of his presence
connecting dots, today, a new adventure starts

 written for dVerse
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writing a 44 word quadrille
incorporating a form of the word ‘map’


author's note: For a friend ...I hope you continue the story

Alex J Cavanaugh author of Dragon of the Stars 

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25 comments:

  1. Love this. I wish her well (upon one of those stars). :)

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    1. Thank you hopefully the stars will align.

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    1. Thanks Dwight! Have a wonderful day

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  3. Bravo!!!

    Muchđź’–love

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  4. "once in a song, she heard love was a work of art"
    she took this advice, she began to sing once more . . .
    I like it, she sets her sights high
    ..

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  5. Beautiful, Truedessa, and I particularly love the lines:
    ‘mapping pieces of their journey in her heart
    once in a song, she heard love was a work of art’.

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    1. Thank you Kim! It do believe what I heard in a song..

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  6. A work of art, a continuing journey. . .what we make of dreams. This is lovely. I wish your friend well.

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    1. Thank you Merril, its my hope he will write a short adventure in the stars.

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  7. Our maps are written as we go. Beautiful.

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    1. That they are charting each adventure one step at a time.

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  8. Thank you for feeling the connection.

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  9. AnonymousMay 02, 2023

    Connecting dots, mapping pieces in a heart .... how lovely the thoughts, how lovely your quadrille. From Helen.

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    1. Thank you Helen, may you always follow the map of your heart.

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  10. Thank you, Trudessa - hint taken!

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    1. Thank you, for supporting my blog and writing.

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  11. Yes... let adventure begin, the day will come

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  12. Ooh, fascinating, romantic and mysterious!

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  13. Good comparison between love and art. Both spring from a creative energy and manifest a healing presence in our being.

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  14. And may it be a good one. Love this part: love was a work of art.

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  15. Luv it. Hello, True. How are you?

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