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You’ll always be in my heart
you've been there from the start
there's something about you
maybe, it's the way you sing the blues
You’ve got me on the move
come ’on we got nothin’ to prove
come’ on we got nothin’ to prove
Your melancholy tone touching my soul
sometimes my dreams are out of control
tonight, the rare full moon is rising
tell me love, what’s over the horizon
You’ve got me on the move
come ’on we got nothin’ to prove
come’ on we got nothin’ to prove
dance with me under the moon- glow
we’ll sway to the melody warm and slow
all this thinking of you, makes me blue
perhaps, the clouds obstruct my view
You’ve got me on the move
do my tears leave you unmoved
do my tears leave you unmoved
You’ll always be in my heart
you’ve been there from the start
there is something about you
maybe, it’s the way you sing the blues
the way you sing the blues
the way you sing the blues
the way you sing the blues
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author's note: I think the blue moon has put me in a melancholy mood
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I was able to see the Blue Full Moon for a few brief moments
This poem would make a great song! I could feel the rhythm and flow!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dwight for feeling the rhythm.
DeleteoKTrue — so you are a lyricist at heart. Very cool my friend… 😉✌🏼🫶🏼
ReplyDeleteRob, you have discovered one of my passions…
DeleteA lyrical poem, Truedessa, that is crying out for a bluesy tune.
ReplyDeleteI hear it in my head….
DeleteOh... this should be sung I think... would love to hear it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn
DeleteYou've captured what makes the difference between a poem and a song. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThank you for noticing, poems and songs often have a lyrical flow.
DeleteHi Truedessa - yes I agree I too feel bluesy ... going into Autumn and a sign of the times. Also it definitely should be sung ... clever - and here's to cheerfulness! - Hilary
ReplyDeleteCheers to cheerfulness!
DeleteNow that would make a great song.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, it would ….
DeleteNow you need to publish the music!
ReplyDeleteIts published in my heart and head..
DeleteAs others have written, this seems like a song. A bluesy tribute to moon and love.
ReplyDeleteA tribute indeed on a September morning…
DeleteThe others have already said it... a beutiful song. Would love to hear it... any chances? :)
ReplyDeleteSing and dance away! Love this bluesy song.
ReplyDeleteWe didn't get to see the Blue Moon - the clouds didn't lift, but you poem/song channels the moment in a melancholy tribute, thanks Truedessa...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful penned
ReplyDeleteLove the blues and the blue moon.
ReplyDelete“dance with me under the moon- glow”
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