Thursday, September 19, 2024

River of Change

Free River Mountains photo and picture
Courtesy of Pixabay

 

 

 

 

 

 

I paddle my canoe on the river of change
    the current has shifted over the years
but, steady stands the mountain range
    even as the four winds switch gears

the current has shifted over the years
    ancient waterways rumble and gurgle
even as the four winds switch gears
    witness the beauty of a basking turtle

Where and when the river divides
The choice is mine on which way to steer

the ancient waterways rumble and gurgle
    my heart and nature sing with each dip
even as the four winds gently shift gears
    the journey can be an adventurous trip

my heart and nature sing with each dip
    but steady stands the mountain range
the journey can be an adventurous trip
    I paddle my canoe on the river of change

Where and when the river divides
The choice is mine on which way to steer 

written for  What's Going On? Choices
hosted by Mary - I think I steered a little
off of the intended prompt.

12 comments:

  1. This is beautiful. I love the idea of paddling on a river of change. Love the format too.

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    1. Thank you my friend for your constant support of my wanderings.

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  2. A wonderful way of expressing human choices via the gift of nature's environment.
    The choice of direction, remains with you and where you decided to steer...

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    1. Eileen thanks for reading - nature is surely a gift that guides us in life.

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  3. That had a nice rhyming rhythm to it.

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    1. Thank you, Alex - wishing you a wonderful weekend

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  4. I too like the idea of paddling on the river of change, making choices along the way. Life is such a wonderful adventure, with so many paths to choose from! Beautiful, Truedessa.

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    1. Mary, thank you for an interesting prompt and for hosting.

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  5. Love this poem! It is an adventurous trip. The rhyme really works, and the repetition does, too. I love that the mountain is steady as the winds and waters shift. Life is like that.

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    1. Susan - We need something steady when around us water and wind shifts.

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  6. Love both the form and content. The image of paddling a canoe on the river of change has beauty and power both. It's good to be the decision maker of one's life. "my heart and nature sing with each dip" Love this.

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    1. Thank you Sumana - we face so many decisions on a daily basis.

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