Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Swept Away

Charing Cross Road, 1937 by Wolfgang Suschitzky


rain
swept me away
at the crossroad
we met

drenched
we embraced
forever changed

author's note : trying a new form 

Septolet

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

19 comments:

  1. You succeeded - I can see the picture!

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  2. Hey Truedessa,

    Well done and you just reminded me I've been to Charring Cross Road. Never heard of "Septolet." What with me being almost tired and it being three in the morning, I thought it read "Septic Toilet"! I'm kidding and good grief, Alex has already commented. Or, is it one of his clones!

    Take care, time for me to check my eyelids for cracks.

    Gary

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  3. short and sweet
    good luck Truedessa
    from - http://imagtalks.blogspot.com/

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  4. Rain obviously brings good fortune and a wonderful relationship.Nice new form Truedessa.

    Hank

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  5. Rain obviously brings good fortune and a wonderful relationship.Nice new form Truedessa.

    Hank

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  6. A good drenching to come due, warm up even if cold at one's zoo

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  7. Oooooh, love this form .. Nice!

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  8. What a change... I think this is exactly how the world can change in an instant...

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  9. Sharp and sweetly romantic ~

    Wishing you Happy New Year and all the best ~

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  10. Good morning, True Blue
    Tell me, how are you?

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  11. Nice form Truedessa and softly romantic. :-)

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  12. this new form rocks! your have done it really beautifully :)

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  13. You taught me a new form! I love trying them thanks! I like it very much it's almost like a "list poem." Bravo!

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  14. Liking this new form. Well done. Happy New Year to you. :)

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  15. You did an amazing septet! :)
    And what a beautiful picture you created! I can see it and I love what I see :)
    Have a wonderful and relaxed Sunday!
    Lots of love and hugs to you,
    Beate

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