Thursday, April 19, 2018

Be My Shakespeare

wikipedia - A Midsummer Night's Dream


















You are the song, I long to hear
sweep me away with your melody
pen a sonnet, be my Shakespeare
you are the song, I long to hear
whisper words of love in my ear
sing me a sonnet, make it heavenly
you are the song, I long to hear
sweep me away with your melody

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33 comments:

  1. I really like the rhyme and repetition in this poem. It conveys a beautiful sentiment.

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    1. It would be nice to know who to thank for this comment. Thank you!

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  2. Hi Truedessa - I need to study some poetry ... and Shakespeare with his sonnets seems like a good start - sometime ... cheers Hilary

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    1. Hilary, you should definitely read some Shakespeare.

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  3. A sweet song ~ Love that repetition of:sweep me away with your melody

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    1. Thanks Grace, I guess I was in a romantic mood.

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  4. Who needs words when you are in love! Just being together is enough!
    Love it!
    Dwight

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    1. Perhaps, you are right, but music and poetry are magic.

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  5. A melody from within only for two, best tune to come due.

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    1. A melody in my head, as you know my head is always in some cloud.

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  6. Sing a song of love and make her happy.

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    1. I am a dreamer the only song playing is in my head. The song of a fool.

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  7. So heavenly 😍😍😍

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  8. The repetitive lines are very effective.

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    1. Hi Bev I thought a triolet would work well for this one.

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  9. It's like we can hear the artist's muse speaking to him.

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    1. Yes, i can hear the melody in my head.

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  10. Nice repeated line: "you are the song, I long to hear"

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  11. There is nothing better than to fly on sonnet wings.

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    1. I am glad you could feel the music! Thank you!

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  13. A very romantic request....."be my Shakespeare". Love this.

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  14. Really love this! Thank you! Big Hugs!

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  16. Be my Shakespeare... Love that line, True.

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  17. Interesting theme, cute reply.

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