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I offered you the portal to my heart
navigating a world of unknown parts
on mystical wings of truest desire
awakening dreams of passion and fire
dancing with poetry, beyond the stars
entering a realm that was only ours
embracing cosmic light, newly inspired
awakening dreams of passion and fire
soaring the multi(verse) two souls entwined
touching you in the spheres of my mind
our imagination lifting us higher
awakening dreams of passion and fire
I offered you the portal to my heart
awakening dreams of passion and fire
sharing with Poets United
Thank you for reading!
A magical write - I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jae Rose
DeleteSuch a beautiful tale of love that truly soars.
ReplyDeleteThank you my kind friend!
DeleteRomantic and pure... wonderfully penned .. I am always a great fan of a true love story
ReplyDeleteHow can one not be a fan of a love story? Thank you for reading.
DeleteThat is beautiful and pure!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex, purity comes from the heart!
DeleteAh, love! The heart is ever hopeful!
ReplyDeleteEver hopeful Bev!
DeleteThis is beyond beautiful!💜 Especially love; "dancing with poetry, beyond the stars."💜
ReplyDeleteSanaa your kind comment brings a smile.
DeleteWhat a beautiful and ethereal poem, Truedessa. Really, I had been thinking about you - wondering if you were back to good health. So I am relieved to see you today.
ReplyDeleteMary thank you for thinking of me, I am slowly making my way back.
DeleteOh sweet balm as I read this poem of love....
ReplyDeleteLove can be a balm as it heals.
DeleteA portal for only two as they intertwine and create one that's known to only them.
ReplyDeleteHi Pat, a special portal to a special world.
DeleteLuv the soar of souls through poetry and imagination
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by my Sunday Standard today Trudessa
much love...
Thanks Gillena, have a lovely Sunday.
DeleteThe portal to your heart...beautiful.
ReplyDeletethank you ayala
Deletelove the illustration for this one!
ReplyDeleteThe illustration is the "star" card, a friend had me pull one from a deck and this was the card chosen. Twas, magical since I wrote the poem first.
DeleteNice. Yes, we must open up to receive and give love. Your poem is a sweet love story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna - a story or dream who really knows.
DeleteThis is lovely. And, once again, your rhyme is stellar. I thought the act of offering a portal to your heart was a stunning image ... to 'two souls entwined'.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wendy as always you make me smile.
DeleteA lovely sonnet ...
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thank you ZQ, I haven't written one in a while and thought it would work well with what I was thinking and feeling.
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ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thank you for the invite. I may have to try and link in one Monday.
DeleteI really liked that. But me being me, all the way until the end I was expecting some tragedy to befall the relationship. Glad it didn't.
ReplyDeleteHi Silver, well sometimes there can be happiness.
DeleteA well crafted piece of writing, again you have given us such an enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Julian.
DeleteSuch a loving, magical write! I love it!! Big Hugs Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteBig Hugs back - thank you
DeleteDeliciously romantic.
ReplyDeleteWow, these words dance with love *smiles*
ReplyDeleteDancing with words and love can bring joy.
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