you are the poem after the rain
you are the song beyond the fog
you are love's sweetest refrain
you are life flowing in my veins
you are blue sky above the smog
you are the poem after the rain
you are a melody that remains
you are a drink of
magical grog
you are love's sweetest refrain
you are reality riding a dream train
you are rhymes, verses and dialogue
you are the poem after the rain
you are the memories that remain
you are the song beyond the fog
you are love's sweetest refrain
you are soaring in another plane
you are the path, I wish to jog
you are the poem after the rain
you are love's sweetest refrain
author's note: Thank you Blue
"you are the song beyond the fog"
author's note: Thank you Blue
"you are the song beyond the fog"
Sure quite the flow. Having one as that I'm sure all wish it so.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, I wrote this over the weekend.
DeleteYes, that really flowed well with the repeating lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex
DeleteI love the structure, as well as the actual rhyme scheme!
ReplyDeleteHi Silver, Thanks for coming over for a visit!
DeleteDelightful ... wonderful read - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary - Cheers!
DeleteI love it. What a sweet poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Crystal! It is nice to see you again.
DeleteWhat a wonderful love sonnet. That's really a great devotion. It's almost Shakespearean.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mark, I do like Shakespeare..
DeleteA beautiful poem with effective repetition and rhyme! I love the circularity of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kim, the circularity of it, I like that!
DeleteOh gosh I love this!💖 Especially; "you are the memories that remain you are the song beyond the fog you are love's sweetest refrain."💖
ReplyDeleteSanaa - thanks for visiting :)
DeleteA lovely villanelle... the repetition of you made it into such a strong love poem
ReplyDeleteHi Bjorn, A form I sometimes like to use and in this case it felt right.
DeleteYou are the song beyond the fog. Yes, you are.
ReplyDeleteBlushing Blue...lets follow the melody...
DeleteTruly, truly beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteThis is extremely beautiful! Love it.
ReplyDeleteHello My Friend! I hope all is well.
DeleteGreat structure as a poem! Got to try it True!
ReplyDeleteHank
Hi Hank, Yes, please try it I am curious as to what you would create.
DeleteYour poem is a song and one which deserves to be sung.
ReplyDeleteIt plays in my head and perhaps that is enough...
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