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Dreams of you unfold in white linen sheets
listening to the songs of Romantica, lost
in the cosmos my
soul searches for you
Diamonds lace the neck of heaven and I
am caught in the allure of a parallel world
revealing beautiful moments, untold stories
Opening the red door to my heart, I let you in
would you ambush my love, devouring passion
lying in the scent of our love, sedated
hosted by Lillian writing Brand Name Poetry
I chose the perfume category
I chose the perfume category
...lying in the scent of our love, sedated ....
ReplyDeleteOh that is so beautiful! So very glad you posted to the prompt! 😊❤️
Thank you for the fun prompt!
DeleteNice phrase: "Opening the red door of my heart" It goes with "white linen sheets".
ReplyDeleteThanks Frank, I love your photography!
DeleteVery nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dwight!
DeleteYour poem is beautifully romantic! I especially love the lines:
ReplyDelete'Diamonds lace the neck of heaven and I
am caught in the allure of a parallel world'.
Thank you Kim, I always think of stars as diamonds shimmering in the night.
DeleteNot a bad ambush to be had at any pad haha
ReplyDeleteIt could be quite the adventure...
DeleteOpen that door and let the ambush happen!
ReplyDeletemay it be so!
DeleteI do love that red door... where is the key?
ReplyDeleteWhere is that key indeed?
DeleteI love your poetry, True. It's both evocative and delicate.
ReplyDeleteSandra - Thanks for the lovely comment.
DeleteThere is much allure in the thought of that parallel world.........lovely to read you, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThat was very pretty. I very rarely write poetry any more, and even more rarely write any romantic poetry!
ReplyDeleteHey Silver, Now you have me curious, I'd like to read one of your poems! Thanks for visiting
DeleteIt's been a while since I posted any poetry on my blog. Maybe I'll re-post an oldie this weekend for you!
DeleteOk, I will look for it this weekend!
DeleteActually, I scheduled four poems in a row on my blog yesterday. Two per week. It'll give me a little vacation.
DeleteOk, I will be sure to visit! Now you are ahead of the game. Hmm how does one become ahead of the game and what game? Would that be the game of life? Three steps forward and two backwards. Did you ever play that game ‘Life’?
DeletePlay it? Sure. I even remember the theme song from the commercials!
DeleteTheme song? I didn't know they had a song.
DeleteThe game of Life is fun!
DeleteThe game of Life is exciting!
It's full of chills
And spills
And highs
And lows.
It's all in the game of Life!
I last heard it over fifty years ago!
Lol I can’t say I ever heard that theme song, but it does sum of life!
DeleteWonderfully romantic!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jo!
DeleteSo romantic! Great expression of passion & sedation :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteOpening the red door to my heart, I let you in
ReplyDeletewould you ambush my love, devouring passion
A nice feeling True, to love and be loved!
Hank
Perhaps, it is all a dream Hank!
DeleteHow are you this Thursday?
You picked a perfect picture for your lovely verse.
ReplyDeleteHave a great one.
Hi Sandra thanks again for coming back!
DeleteI really love your poems Truedessa! So romantic and passionate!! Gorgeous picture too! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I too like the photo.
Deleteenjoyed this, had an instant image of Victorian lovers sneaking away into a garden
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed my words!
DeleteYou never fail to stir my heart and mind with your beautiful poems, Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThank you Fundy, so kind of you - I am smiling
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