Thursday, April 19, 2018

Be My Shakespeare

wikipedia - A Midsummer Night's Dream


















You are the song, I long to hear
sweep me away with your melody
pen a sonnet, be my Shakespeare
you are the song, I long to hear
whisper words of love in my ear
sing me a sonnet, make it heavenly
you are the song, I long to hear
sweep me away with your melody

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  1. AnonymousApril 19, 2018

    I really like the rhyme and repetition in this poem. It conveys a beautiful sentiment.

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      It would be nice to know who to thank for this comment. Thank you!

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  2. Hilary Melton-ButcherApril 19, 2018

    Hi Truedessa - I need to study some poetry ... and Shakespeare with his sonnets seems like a good start - sometime ... cheers Hilary

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      Hilary, you should definitely read some Shakespeare.

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  3. GraceApril 19, 2018

    A sweet song ~ Love that repetition of:sweep me away with your melody

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      Thanks Grace, I guess I was in a romantic mood.

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  4. UnknownApril 19, 2018

    Who needs words when you are in love! Just being together is enough!
    Love it!
    Dwight

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      Perhaps, you are right, but music and poetry are magic.

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  5. Pat HattApril 20, 2018

    A melody from within only for two, best tune to come due.

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      A melody in my head, as you know my head is always in some cloud.

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  6. Alex J. CavanaughApril 20, 2018

    Sing a song of love and make her happy.

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      I am a dreamer the only song playing is in my head. The song of a fool.

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  7. Sherry Blue SkyApril 20, 2018

    I love this.

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  8. Sanaa RizviApril 20, 2018

    So heavenly 😍😍😍

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  9. indybevApril 20, 2018

    The repetitive lines are very effective.

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      Hi Bev I thought a triolet would work well for this one.

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  10. The Silver FoxApril 20, 2018

    It's like we can hear the artist's muse speaking to him.

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    1. TruedessaApril 20, 2018

      Yes, i can hear the melody in my head.

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  11. Frank HubenyApril 20, 2018

    Nice repeated line: "you are the song, I long to hear"

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  12. brudbergApril 21, 2018

    There is nothing better than to fly on sonnet wings.

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  13. Bekkie SanchezApril 21, 2018

    That is a wonderful song!

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    1. TruedessaApril 21, 2018

      I am glad you could feel the music! Thank you!

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  14. MishApril 21, 2018

    A very romantic request....."be my Shakespeare". Love this.

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  15. Magic Love CrowApril 21, 2018

    Really love this! Thank you! Big Hugs!

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  17. Blue GrumpsterMay 04, 2018

    Be my Shakespeare... Love that line, True.

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  18. humbirdMay 17, 2018

    Interesting theme, cute reply.

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