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| Elena Kalis |
blue water
pure sacrifice
submerged my
spirit floats
transcending depths reflective pool
rebirth
new hope
unsinkable
divine inspiration
red ribbon symbol
of my love
I breathe
posted for the mag 182
And as long as you breathe there is hope
ReplyDeleteEven hope of finding a sturdy rope lol
Kinda morbid there I suppose
But that is how my mind goes
Be nice to jump in the sea
and come out as renewed as a busy bee
There is always hope
Deleteno need for a rope
unless you plan to pull
me to shore..or through
a magical door...
haha I'll extend a rope
DeleteAs away we cope
And the cat will pull you in
He likes to run off with rope at our bin
Surely hope is swinging on the wings of her spirit, ever guiding her. Lovely reflection.
ReplyDeleteHi Karen,
DeleteThank you for the lovely comment.
breathing under that water might be fatal....smiles...there is a wildness in that though...the new hope that is unsinkable willing to test those bounds...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteAh true about breathing underwater..I love the water and swim every chance I get..it is liberating to me and I like the sensation of water on my skin..to breathe underwater is about slowing down and facing life's challenges when you feel like you're drowning. 'Unsinkable" determination to test those bounds..
Always, a pleasure to converse as I enjoy your insight-fulness.
I love that image... I also love that she appears to be upright, although it could be flipped 90 degrees to the left and she would be submerged in the water... rising... waiting to break the surface...
ReplyDeleteInteresting painting, dear...
~shoes~
Good Morning Shoes,
DeleteWell upright is a good way to appear..strong in her balance almost dance like wouldn't you say..interesting take on the 90 degree move.."waiting to break the surface" I like the sound of that..I wonder what she see's in her reflection...
Thanks so much for visiting..I enjoy your company..Hope today finds you in good spirits.
It's my pleasure to visit!! :o)
Delete~shoes~
Shoes,
DeletePlease don't stay away so long next time. I enjoy chatting with you.
Thank you... how sweet of you to say.
DeleteI enjoy our visits as well! :oD
~shoes~
This is fantastic, I love the way it reads, the way its shaped, powerful and profound content wonderful
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,
DeleteThank you so much for the lovely comment.
Splendidly absorbing; good writing...
ReplyDeleteBerowne,
DeleteThank you!
Worth reading more than once.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSurely something to have and to hold!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit and kind reply.
DeleteUnsinkable sacrifice....such a pure concept ..cheers
ReplyDeleteGood Evening,
DeleteThanks and Cheers to you!
"unsinkable"
ReplyDeleteRebirth, reminding ourselves of who we are, finding our inner strengths, reinventing ourselves. Change is good!
Hi Ginny,
DeleteThanks so much and change can be good indeed.
Nice tender feel to this as one reads..love these lines
ReplyDelete' could this moment be more than coincidence
our consciousness drifts to a higher plane'
Dorianna,
DeleteHello, thanks for reading my poem the visit is appreciated.
THis piece is full of hope and courage. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you hope keeps us alive and courage helps us survive.
Deletenicely done
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