catching a ride on a passing cloud
drifting high above the busy crowd
hearing my thoughts and beating heart
life pulsating through my veins
i feel no pain float with me
in unison, no need to wear a coat
moist warm lips flutter kiss my throat
feel the passion you stir within me
falling from grace to touch your face
you take my breath away dancing on
the edge of desire singing songs
making love above the city lights
posted for dVerse poetry 140 characters at a time.. twitter length stanzas
Getting all kinky at your sea
ReplyDeleteJoining the mile high club are we? lol
Staying above and seeing the lights
Would sure be such sights
Although I don't think they'll get as much attention
Maybe just a passing mention
Hi Pat,
ReplyDeleteIt's just me dreaming with my head in a cloud. Tweet #4
Walking the streets of darkness
who will be my light, who will
see me through, my candle flickers
a flame of hope in a world
lost in despair
The cat will shine a light
ReplyDeleteAlthough if you want it bigger it could be a fright
As he'll back up his little rhyming umm mass
and simply pass some gas
That will increase the light
Getting you through the night
oh Cat I am feeling blue
Deleteshine that light in my soul
but, I'll pass on the gas
just make the light last..
Have a great night!
falling from grace to touch your face...smiles...i like that...there is a giving up for love in that to me...
ReplyDeleteand hey i am on vacation in the city right now...might need to put those city lights to use...haha
Hi Brian,
DeleteThanks for the note..you are always so kind. I hope you enjoy your vacation in the city. I'm not sure what city but, wherever you journey be safe and have fun.
Peace & Light
I'd love to catch a ride on a drifting cloud!
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie..would be wonderful to float around..
DeleteThe first stanza reminds me of long summer days, where I stare at the clouds for so long, it is as if I'm floating on them.
ReplyDeleteI agree and I enjoy cloud watching on a summer day.
Deletesoothingly romantic
ReplyDeletebetter than a gaudy flying carpet
lol..aprille that is funny but a magic carpet ride might be fun..just think of the adventures.
DeleteI like what you've done with these. I never thought to rhyme on twitter. Now I can't think why not!
ReplyDeleteI guess it's easy to rhyme on twitter..just remember only 140 characters..have a nice night.
Deletehmmmm....making love on the floating clouds..that sounds wonderful to me...
ReplyDeleteYes, cloud floating would be divine..hope you are doing well.
DeleteCatching a ride on a passing cloud... a lovely thought
ReplyDeleteBjorn, Nice to see you again..thank you..
DeleteI'm thinking you're on the balcony of a skyscraper - it gets very floaty feeling up there, I imagine. Lovely use of language here.
ReplyDeleteOh, that is a lovely image for sure the balcony of the 21st floor perhaps.
Delete...catching a ride on a passing cloud --- ah, i will ne'er get tired of doing that... your verses are very lovely to read with that added effort to rhyme... excellent... smiles...
ReplyDeletethank you Kelvin my friend..nice to see you again.
DeleteVery sensual write-- and this form seems to have led well into the flow of your thoughts...terse, yet full. Nice~ Jason
ReplyDeleteJason,
DeleteThank you so much for your comment. Hope you have a nice weekend.
Lovely to be able to express such love in 140 characters x3 and catching a cloud. :0)
ReplyDeleteHello Victoria,
DeleteThis was a fun prompt trying to get it said in 140 characters.
Nice passion--we all need someone to share our cloud with. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Nico..it is nice to see you again.
DeleteSo heartfelt and so true... you decant your emotionality into the 140-character crystal like a selected wine.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,
DeleteFirst, thank you for the interesting prompt it was fun to participate and your reply is lovely.
You're very welcome! Looking forward to more of your poetry!
DeleteVery passionate. :-)
ReplyDeletethank you so much :)
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