Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Sorry, Wrong Number














I've got your number
but, it won't be me calling
no, it won't be me calling

You played with my heart
one too many times
singing out one last refrain
now my sun it don't shine
cloudy days reign

I've been feeling blue
sinking in a black hole
lost in my thoughts of you
shine some light in my soul

I've got your number
but, it won't be me calling
no, it won't be me calling

You played me like a fool
running all over town
breaking all the rules
when I wasn't around

I got the picture frame & all
smashed it on the floor
crystal rain begins to fall
faded dreams, memories torn
no longer hang on my wall

Yeah, I got your number
but,  it won't be me calling
no, it won't be me calling

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34 comments:

  1. The Drugstore NotebookJuly 30, 2013

    Fun!

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  2. MaryJuly 30, 2013

    Ya, sometimes the best thing to do is to delete someone's number...along with deleting the person out of one's mind!!

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Sometimes, that is true best to delete.

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    2. Red ShoesAugust 05, 2013

      I've done this.. have had women fuck with my head so much... I'm better off when I delete that number and I have no way to contact them again.

      ~shoes~

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  3. Brian MillerJuly 30, 2013

    oh yeah, when they are out running the town...not the ones i would be calling either...smiles...i concur with mary...ha.

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Hi Brian,

      Smiles back..thanks for dropping in as always nice to read your comments and I concur...

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  4. Pat HattJuly 30, 2013

    haha well you know
    You could call them at your show
    Hold on to the frame good and tight
    Then when they open the door let it take flight
    Whammo! right to the face.
    Let them run around town now with a bruised face embrace
    Then hit delete from mind and phone
    Giving them nothing but a dial tone
    Of course that could result in Judge Judy
    Maybe just pelt him with duty
    The dog kind
    Or I'm sure a horse wouldn't mind lol

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      haha - laughing at your comment
      witty as ever & the cat is clever
      Whammo, watch the pieces sprawl
      I can envision it all...hit
      delete for that cheat..

      hope you have have a great day
      at your bay as the cats play

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  5. AnonymousJuly 30, 2013

    A well done take on the topic. Nicely done!

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Charles,

      I always appreciate a visit from you...thank you!

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  6. flaubertJuly 30, 2013

    Best to be done with the fool, if they are running all round town without you. I like the beat to this, Truedessa.

    Pamela

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Thank you Pamela! Hope you have a lovely day...

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  7. BeachannyJuly 30, 2013

    This felt like a song. It has a beat, it has a message, and it has a lot of soul. Clearly you're a poet with a lot of ways to convey your message. Well done!

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Very receptive of you thanks for feeling my words.

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  8. ClaudiaJuly 30, 2013

    that has a cool blues feeling to it...and yeah...in that case, better don't call...

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Good Morning Claudia,

      I do enjoy listening to the blues especially when I'm feeling blue.

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  9. James RainsfordJuly 31, 2013

    Reads like a song. Would make great lyrics for a twelve bar blues. Love it!

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Thank you James..I do enjoy the blues I can hear it playing in my head.

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    2. Red ShoesAugust 05, 2013

      Hi there, Trudessa... reads like a song... that was exactly my thoughts... :o)

      I've been busy and just haven't felt well lately... blah...

      I trust all is great with you, dear...

      ~shoes~

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    3. TruedessaAugust 06, 2013

      Hi

      Thanks for stopping over for a visit. Im sorry to
      hear you are not feeling well. Hope your spirit brightens up soon!

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  10. VictoriaJuly 31, 2013

    I guess I'm not alone in seeing this as begging to be put to music. Definitely bluesy with a great refrain.

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Thanks Victoria for feeling the lyrical flow.

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  11. Fundy BlueJuly 31, 2013

    Wow! Lots of people are posting about broken hearts recently. I could definitely listen to this as a song! Have a good one!

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Hi,

      Haven't seen you in a while hope you are well. Thanks for the visit.

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  12. AnonymousJuly 31, 2013

    A lovely write-- like lyrics to a song. It is light and easy to read yet is full of hurt and emotion. Funny, too, I nearly wrote of a telephone call but the poem changed on its own. Have a good evening, Jason

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    1. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      Hi Jason,

      Thank you so much for the visit and kind words. I guess we had telephone calls on the brainwave. I hope you have a good evening as well.

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  13. kaykualaJuly 31, 2013

    They can well be running on their own eventually! Take a hard stand and there'll be less tears! Great write Trudessa!

    Hank

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    1. kaykualaJuly 31, 2013

      Apologies for the duplication! I thought it didn't register the first time

      Hank

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    2. TruedessaJuly 31, 2013

      No problem Hank thanks for visiting and also for your kind words.

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  14. Red ShoesAugust 05, 2013

    You can try this number...

    867-5309-E-E-E-ine...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axLRUszuu9I

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    1. TruedessaAugust 06, 2013

      Hey You,

      Thanks for the link to the tune..always enjoy music.

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  15. Red ShoesAugust 05, 2013

    No...

    Wait...

    That was the wrong number...

    Try this one...

    634-5789

    Surely, Wilson Pickett wouldn't lie to you!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRb0gBUyOBQ

    ~shoes~

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    1. TruedessaAugust 06, 2013

      Hey,

      This is a good number like the beat..thanks for the smile.

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