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Our love floats in the blue mist
nightingale sings his poetic songs
rolling waves, surges of emotion
rolling waves, surges of emotion
pounding rhythm, no escaping
Can't get enough,
can't get enough
your love is makin' me crazy
wanna make love in the moonlight
Silhouettes dancing cheek to cheek
sliding to the melody of the sea
embracing our vulnerability
collapsing into the shoreline
Boldly expressive, wandering hands
leaving lasting imprints lovingly
leaving lasting imprints lovingly
moist bodies molding in the sand
whooshing surf, taste of salted air
I'm so stuck, stuck, on you babe
sinking into the depth of your eyes
sinking into the depth of your eyes
kisses linger on warm wet lips
sweeping me away, rising tide
Under the stars seeking heaven
can't break free from your love
wanna feel your body next to me
wanna feel you deep inside of me
Moon rising in a velvet sky
thunderous our
souls merge
crashing waves ecstasy, gentle cry
crashing waves ecstasy, gentle cry
trembling, surrendering our hearts
Can't get enough, can't get enough
your love is makin' me crazy
wanna make love in the sunlight
posted for dVerse
ha you need to put this to a tune...i would love to hear it...a little crazy love goes a long way...seriously, sing it! smiles.
ReplyDeleteGood Evening Brian,
DeleteA little crazy love is always good..thanks for the visit my friend.
I love the rhythm and the love that comes through so strongly in this poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Mary always a pleasure to have you visit
DeleteBeautifully sensual. I loved the rhythm and the flow which is just like that of a gently caressing breeze.
ReplyDeleteThank you I am glad you could feel the rhythm.
DeleteWow that was full of love
ReplyDeleteBetter hope no one watches from above
They may get a full moon of their own
And hear quite a groan haha
And day and night
Just keep going and letting it take flight
now there is the way to be
And that stuck sure works for me
Well, why not bring in the morning sunrise
DeleteI knew you would like the "stuck" part...
seems I have a melody playing in my head
as I drift off to bed..(smiling)
Good Night!
There's no stopping the rising tide, is there? Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit and kind words.
DeleteThis feels to me like it wants to be put to music...I thought this as soon as I read the first refrain.
ReplyDeleteHi Victoria,
DeleteThanks for the visit a poem that wants to be sung.
Victoria said exactly what I was going to say! Reads like a song...well done :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, perhaps a lyrical poem with the heart of a song.
DeleteMoonlight (preferred) ... sunlight (well, make it the shade) and also... give me at least a hammock or a big picnic quilt :)
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret,
DeleteI agree moonlight preferred..
there's so much magic in the sea, waves, tides and oh that love making in the sun and moonlight...lovely..smiles
ReplyDeleteClaudia,
DeleteI agree there is something magical about the sea..it is vast and one cannot help but, fall under its spell.
Sensual indeed , a song of love , words of romance and anything to do with the waves or the ocean, is bliss to our poetic muse - very, very nice.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a song lyric to me - better set it to music - right away! I know a good song when I read one! Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I am glad you could hear the sounds of a song.
DeleteA very sensual poem!
ReplyDelete"embracing our vulnerability" - a beautiful line!
Thanks for the visit and the lovely comment.
Deletefilled with love and passion:)
ReplyDeleteThis reads like a song!! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteDana,
DeleteThank you so much!
Yes, I hear it as a song to...and it has me craving a cocktail of a certain name!
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteThank you and yes that cocktail would be nice about now..smiling..
Very much a song - with that exuberance and longing. Lots of fun. Thanks, k.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,
DeleteThanks for the visit..glad you enjoyed my poem/song.
romantic, passionate, a little bit wild and daring, making love in the moonlight and again in the sunlight..a lovely mad love affair..loved this poem
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit..wild and daring all you need is a quiet beach...
DeleteThis is very nice... I wish I could write poetry... I don't think I have the discipline or the patience (if those two are not the same thing...).
ReplyDeleteI would agree with the others... most definitely, this is a work that could be set to music. It's my recollection that Jim Morrison, of The Doors, was a poet... he would write the lyrics, and some of the other guys would work the music around what he wrote.
Of course, that was way back... and the old saying is, that if you can remember the '60s... then you really didn't live them...
HAR!
I hope all is well with you, dear...
~shoes~
Hi Shoes,
DeleteMorrison was a great poet and his music is still relevant to this day. Sometimes, when I write I listen to him and pop some wine..he was far ahead of his time when it came to music and the art of poetry and of course the band was instrumental to their success.
Maybe, you could try some free verse as you don't have to adhere to any form just let it flow from deep inside.
Thanks for the visit as always..
HAR!
Keep in touch! I am doing ok "going through the motions of my life"
Nice to have crazy love.... Beautiful .
ReplyDeleteayala - Thanks for the visit..I guess crazy love is a good thing.
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