Sunday, April 6, 2014

Within the Mirror View











Dream portal, illuminating mirror
beholding myself deep within your soul
soft reflections of you, my eyes clearer
two  images  harmoniously whole

staring into your eyes dazzling starlight
through the looking glass lies a mystery
crossing a new dimension, we take flight
etched across the heavens, our history

silvery moonbeams, two silhouettes dance
willow drums hum, behind curtains of night
as one slipping into a rhythmic trance
entwined arms & limbs a lover's delight

love shatters boundaries, beautiful view
beyond the horizon,  a glimpse of you


posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads writing about mirrors
sharing with Poets United.. I will be back to read as many as I
can..please be sure to do the same for your fellow poets. Have a
great day!

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52 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerApril 06, 2014

    What a beautiful reflection....I rarely dream when i sleep. It is with open eyes I peer through the dream portal.

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Susie,

      I am a deep dreamer and grateful for those magical mirrors.

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  2. brudbergApril 06, 2014

    A dream - especially the beautiful ones like this - that's what mirrors should be.

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Bjorn, a dream through a mirror of the soul..thank you for your kind words.

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  3. Sumana RoyApril 06, 2014

    'two images harmoniously whole'..love this line...

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  4. Brian MillerApril 06, 2014

    hey i like the dance you got going there...in the third stanza...and if anything can overcome the boundaries, love can...that is for sure...

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Ah, the dance of all dances..magical in so many ways..hope you are enjoying your weekend.

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  5. Alex J. CavanaughApril 06, 2014

    Love does indeed break all boundaries. Very nice!

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Alex,

      Thanks for taking the time to visit as I know you are busy with the A to Z challenge.

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    2. Alex J. CavanaughApril 07, 2014

      And thank you for your gracious comment on my post. I'm glad you like my theme and hope it continues to entertain you. I can't rhyme. All I can do is amuse...

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  6. GraceApril 06, 2014

    What a beautiful sonnet on love ~ I specially like the third stanza on silvery moonbeams ~ Ending couplet is romantic & passionate ~

    Thanks for linking up with Real Toads ~ Wishing you Happy Weekend ~

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Thank you Grace for the interesting prompt as it was inspiring..

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  7. Pat HattApril 06, 2014

    Seeing two in one can be as bright as the sun, the boundaries can break and new paths two can make, just have to open and see, great love one write done by thee.

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Pat,

      Thank you as always for all your inspiration..see you soon aboard our ship to bora bora bay..smiling today..

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  8. Other MaryApril 06, 2014

    Lovely sonnet Trudessa.

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  9. kaykualaApril 06, 2014

    Love knows no bounds! It transcends barriers and boundaries. The image of a loved one is always seen in the distance! Great write Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Hank,

      Thanks for visiting..I see you are still number one at the cat's bay. I hope you have a wonderful day...

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  10. GabriellaApril 06, 2014

    What a beautiful dream you have evoked in your sonnet, Trudessa! "beholding myself deep within your soul" - my favourite line.

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Thank you Gabriella, I too like that line..

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  11. Vandana SharmaApril 06, 2014

    The culmination of the dream with the glimpse of lover...:-)

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  12. revelationsApril 06, 2014

    it is amazing when you see the world with two sets of eyes,two souls and two hearts...it opens things that you never saw before...

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Robert,

      That is so true..very insightful of you..

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  13. TALONApril 06, 2014

    This was so ethereal and light...just beautiful, Truedessa.

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Thank you Talon it was a poem I felt deep inside..

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  14. Gloria BakerApril 06, 2014

    Love this Truedessa!!

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Hi Gloria,

      Thanks for visiting..I just love the food over at your site..especially the blueberry ones..

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  15. UnknownApril 06, 2014

    Beautiful. Loved this.

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  16. ZQApril 06, 2014

    Very nice!
    ZQ

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  17. NatašekApril 06, 2014

    lovely and touching.

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  18. Sherry Blue SkyApril 06, 2014

    Beautiful, and your closing lines are especially lovely.....

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    1. TruedessaApril 06, 2014

      Thank you my friend..I hope you are enjoying your weekend..

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  19. AnonymousApril 06, 2014

    This is beautiful.

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  20. MaryApril 06, 2014

    This poem really gives me a dreamy surreal feeling. Very nice.

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  21. M. A. S.April 06, 2014

    Very good work with the rhyme. I wish I were a more sophisticated rhymer.

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    1. TruedessaApril 07, 2014

      Thanks for your kind comment and visit.

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  22. humbirdApril 06, 2014

    Lovely,Truedessa :)x

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  23. KerridwenApril 07, 2014

    Lots of great mysterious imagery :)

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  24. Optimistic ExistentialistApril 07, 2014

    I really truly love this. Love shatters all boundaries indeed doesn't it?

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    1. TruedessaApril 07, 2014

      Hi Keith,

      Thanks for coming over for a visit so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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  25. EllaApril 07, 2014

    Gorgeous and so many wondrous lines! I love your poem~

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  26. MargaretApril 07, 2014

    beyond the "horizon"… a glimpse of you. Nice!

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