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In a blue sea I met a spotted cat
on the back of a polka dotted whale
the two of them had some amazing tales
so , I asked the two how do you make dreams
a splish and a splash and a dash of that
dish wishy wish under purple moonbeams
seek the starfish , wearing a magic hat
here I met a striped turtle named Myrtle
so , I asked the two how do you make dreams
a splish and a splash and a dash of that
dish wishy wish under purple moonbeams
seek the starfish , wearing a magic hat
here I met a striped turtle named Myrtle
she would carry
my dreams into
the sea
seahorses jumped over coral hurdles
smiling moon aglow dancing over trees
musical waves softly lull me to sleep
realm of possibilities dreams run deep
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seahorses jumped over coral hurdles
smiling moon aglow dancing over trees
musical waves softly lull me to sleep
realm of possibilities dreams run deep
posted for dVerse
ha - i want a magic hat... cool on the turtles and seahorses... i like the playful atmosphere
ReplyDeleteIt feels like a nursery rhyme. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThat's quite a soothing, gentle lullaby of a poem - a nice change of pace from the other nonsense verses I've been reading today.
ReplyDeleteSo very nicely done Trudessa. Enjoyed your take.
ReplyDeleteSo sweet a sonnet.. exactly like a dream.. I love spotted whales.. (reminds me of that first part of Fantasia II...)
ReplyDeletehaha that would make a fun book. Spotted Cat and polka dotted whale hit the dream trail.
ReplyDeleteVery playful sonnet. Good descriptions!
ReplyDeleteMyrtle the Turtle certainly does get around! Your poem is delightful--a happy sonnet.
ReplyDeleteSo enjoyable to read! Love all the imagery and your closing lines are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteIt's very creative! Funny characters :) cool form!
ReplyDeleteYou've obviously had fun writing this ... and I had great fun reading it ... smiles. Thanks for joining in.
ReplyDeleteVery nice imagery, characters and compositions - Trudessa, thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
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