softly whispering through warm autumn mist
pearl colored clouds slowly drift overhead
two souls touching, world ceases to exist
lying in leaves of splendor crimson red
catching their breath beneath colorful hues
scent of fall filling lungs, gasping for air
tangled limbs, desires climbing skies of blue
brushing parted lips, wondrous kiss they share
uncloaked beauty, caught in passionate light
journey filled with twists following their dreams
seeking solace, wandering hearts take flight
caught in rapture, releasing silent screams
finding peace in the stillness of their love
under a gold crown heaven shines above
posted for Poets Untied
the leaves around here are starting to change
an early fall perhaps, as summer days fade..
Thank you for reading and I will be around
later to read all your wonderful poetry..
the leaves around here are starting to change
an early fall perhaps, as summer days fade..
Thank you for reading and I will be around
later to read all your wonderful poetry..
Such a lovely sonnet, capturing the passionate light of the two souls ~ Happy autumn weekend to you ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace and Happy Sunday to you!
Deletean autumn delight...love the sensuous imagery all through...beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you ..hard to believe Autumn colors are already showing..
DeleteThe changes of autumn captured in such preciseness - let us enjoy the change and look out for that bite.
ReplyDeleteHi Bjorn,
DeleteAutumn a time of change once again..I will miss the long summer days..
Two as one making their own heat as fall umm falls lol does seem to be coming a bit early this year indeed, hopefully that doesn't mean the same for winter.
ReplyDeleteWell, let's hope winter doesn't show too early as that is one season
DeleteI am not fond of as it brings snow, ice and cold wind.
Wow, a sonnet! I am amazed at your poetic superpowers. A very autumn poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so glad you enjoyed my sonnet..
DeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Thanks for visiting :)
Deleteoh, this is... brings tears to the eye. just lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the lovely comment...
DeleteWow. Everything is making love! The clouds are so beautiful at it, and there go teh branches and the couple underneath. That warm autumn mist is a lot like spring fever.
ReplyDeleteHi Susan,
DeleteAutumn brings vibrant colors much like spring both a time of change..who wouldn't want to get lost in the moment.
Lovely! When two souls are touching, very little is important except the experience of the beautiful moment.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary,
DeleteLost under a canopy of orange and yellow gold..
Romantic, sensuous and beautiful. The seasons do seem to make love as they tangle one day warm, the other cold, 'til they find the proper temperature, as lovers do. Beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteThank Myrna..always a pleasure to read your comments..Hope you are enjoying your day..
DeleteThis is lovely! We are not there yet though I would love to be--continued warm and dry=
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the warmer months but, fall does hold some beautiful
Deletecolors so vibrant..
Beautiful! I love autumn!! xo
ReplyDeleteGloria my dear baker friend..nice to have you visit..
DeleteCaptured the true essence of both autumn and love here - they are meant to be intertwined :-)
ReplyDeleteAutumn seems to be arriving rather quickly here ..where did summer go???
DeleteI wish my fall was this beautiful. Mine is less gasping and kisses and more raking leaves in the cold.
ReplyDeleteWell, no raking around here yet the leaves are just starting to
Deleteturn colors but, the air is getting that crisp feeling..
Quite a romantic tryst you created here.
ReplyDeleteI blame it on the autumn colors so vibrant it makes the mind wander..
DeleteHumble apologies for my lengthy delay in actually visiting your poetic site. You have encapsulated the ambience of the resplendent colours of autumn, of love. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGary :)
Welcome my friend no apology needed here..I am just glad to see
Deleteyou again..I hope you are settling in..
smiles.. usually everyone talks about the magic of being in love in spring... but in autumn it is probably even more magical
ReplyDeleteAs beautiful as the fall colors themselves!
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