I want to feel the
sun
but, all I see are
clouds
I wonder where the
journey goes
I wonder where it
ends
I am but a vessel
in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows
in the land of make believe
loving you with a
full heart
it's the only way I
know
letting my emotions flow
letting my emotions flow
I can't let
your go
I want to feel the
sun
but, all I feel is
rain
I wonder where the
journey goes
I wonder where it
ends
I am but a vessel
in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows
in a land of make believe
Loving you seems easy
some may call me a
fool
the world can be
cruel
Sometimes we need to break the rules
I want to feel the
sun
but, all I see are
clouds
I wonder where the
journey goes
I wonder where it
ends
I am but a vessel
in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows
in a land of make believe
crystal visions
before my eyes
believing we are
kindred souls
your words make me
whole
for that dream I gladly pay the toll
I want to feel the
sun
but, all I feel is
rain
I wonder where the
journey goes
I wonder where it
ends
I am but a vessel in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows
in a land of make believe
Loving you with a
full heart
I need you to know
I can't let you go
I can't let you go
to you my heart I
bestow
Note: Sharing with Poets United ~ I am not sure if everyone can see the video so I posted the poem as well. They are two slightly different versions as I couldn't decide which one I liked better. All pictures are my own except the blue rose as that artist is unknown. Thank you for visiting.
I enjoyed the video and your photos are beautiful! Oh, what love does to us you have so perfectly expressed, Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThank you Talon and yes Love does seem to do a number to us.
DeleteI love the imagery of a vessel in a drifting sea, chasing rainbows in a land of make believe....very vivid and powerful.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting :)
DeleteI couldn't see the video.. But I very much enjoyed you gospel.. Strong with imagery.. A very strong read.
ReplyDeleteI am not sure if it is a gospel but, it does have that sort of feel.
DeleteThank you for sharing your deep feelings with us.
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
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Thank you for reading my thoughts..
DeleteA nice unfolding of deep faith and devotion...beautiful Truedessa...
ReplyDeleteThank you..
DeleteThe video was a great idea. I liked the images with the words. Those words flow like a song.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex, I tried a bit of experimenting..I agree it does flow like a song.
DeleteA lovely presentation, Truedessa. Some wonderful lines, and it would be nice to hear it sung! No sun here this morning, so I could really get into your thoughts! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary, those cloudy days like to linger for a bit, but I guess it makes the sun feel twice as nice.
DeleteGreat video addition indeed, awesome idea as the images ring true with the words all the more. Put to music could really be a hit song too.
ReplyDeleteHi Pat,
DeleteMaybe, next time some music will come into play.
Sweet! (for some reason I had no sound from the video, but it didn't deter from its wonderful lines and creativity)
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Hi,
DeleteThere is no sound on this one I just created a picture show for my words. So glad you enjoyed anyway ;)
i loved the rhythm and rhyme of this lovely poem. and yes, how you structured it too.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing the video, but i cannot hear the audio too. maybe i don't have that audio codec installed in my pc. :)
Hi,
DeleteThanks for visiting your computer is fine there is no audio on this one. A silent picture show today.
Lovly song...Wish, I could hear you reading......nice images x
ReplyDeleteHmm..maybe, I can do a reading soon.
DeleteI can see the video just fine. Those images went great went with the poem. Very well done. I know the feeling of wanting to feel the sun and only getting rain.
ReplyDeleteThanks glad you could see the video as I wasn't sure how that would work out. Well, I guess a little rain has to fall in the journey of life :)
DeleteVery beautiful writing, Truedessa :) I enjoyed your pictures very much, too!
ReplyDeleteThank you Torie..
DeleteI enjoyed the video and the poem Truedessa ~ Such an earnest plea for love, who knows where the journey will bring us ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing ~
The journey goes where it goes I guess..thanks for visiting..
DeleteThey are not very different but I slightly prefer the version not in the video - though the video is beautiful to watch.
ReplyDeleteHi Rosemary,
DeleteThanks for the input they have a slightly different feel.
Thanks for sharing both the video and your poem.
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DeleteThis is beautiful, my friend. It's always a love story in here and in this old world that is a good thing:)!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry, What can I say I am a hopeless romantic..
DeleteYour word really resonate with me. I want to feel the sun. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of adding the video. Went perfectly with the beautiful words :)
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