Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Atonement

our notes
whispers of love
message of atonement
mercy in words of devotion
forgive
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poems
sealed memories
forgiveness in a kiss
ceaselessly beating in my heart
true-love

posted for MagpieTales
form Cinquain
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30 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 08, 2016

    True love, indeed. I can feel it in your words. Lovely writing, my friend.

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  2. DEZMONDMarch 09, 2016

    I like the look of the structure!

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  3. rajlakshmiMarch 09, 2016

    Beautifully written form.

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  4. ayalaMarch 09, 2016

    Gentle and lovely.

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  5. Pat HattMarch 09, 2016

    Forgiveness can sure come due with true love through and through

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  6. SandraMarch 09, 2016

    nice !

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  7. Rajiv SankarapillaiMarch 09, 2016

    Good.

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  8. Alex J. CavanaughMarch 09, 2016

    Praying our message reaches the sendee!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 09, 2016

      Alex,

      Praying all those messages reach their destination.

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  9. Carrie Van HornMarch 09, 2016

    True love captured here in your beautiful poem and blog Truedessa!

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  10. shadowfireMarch 10, 2016

    Hi there... Very touching writings... I am a big fan of Anais Nin and I see some influence of her style in your poems... :)

    ~ shadowfire ~

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2016

      Thank you, I will have to read some of her work.

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  11. Ankita March 11, 2016

    you have penned very touching and awesome cinquains on the prompt!

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  12. Walter J. WojtanikMarch 12, 2016

    I love writing in forms, and this works so well with you poem! Beautiful written.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2016

      Thanks Walter, I enjoy the cinquain.

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  13. brudbergMarch 12, 2016

    Oh this is so romantic :-)

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  14. MichaelMarch 12, 2016

    love and forgiveness. How sweet if they go on.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2016

      love and forgiveness are the key ...

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  15. Susan AndersonMarch 15, 2016

    Lovely words. I like the romance.

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