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and the clouds burst forth
with fire and smoke
the dragon soared
through silent stars
she woke to the rush
of thunder
in an hour of darkness
it was he alone who
would calm her
heavy heart
he woke at 3:00 am
to her soft cries
feeling her deep within
his soul she, the
navigator of the stars
their world was full
of magical knights
through the mist
she blew him a kiss
for him she would
give her very heart
connected through
a mystical realm
bonded by love
author's note: wip - fragments from something I am writing
as the muse seems to re-arrange the story..
sharing with dVerse
That is beautiful. If that is just the fragments, the whole must be incredible.
ReplyDeleteI think he needs her just as much...
Thank you Alex, it was inspired by another story :)
DeleteWhat a mystical and magical write, Truedessa. It is good that she has him to calm her heavy heart and that they have such a mystical connection!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, I tend to be drawn to the mystical realm.
DeleteTwo becoming one as together fragments are spun
ReplyDeleteSmiling Pat, sometimes those fragments turn into something beautiful.
DeleteLove the bond of love, mystical and dreamy ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace, I hope you had a Happy Easter!
DeleteThe connection between the subjects is enchanting. I'm curious about their story--how long have they been together, what sealed the bond, what brings the tears...
ReplyDeleteLike Alex suggests, the whole must be marvelous. ♥
Thank you for your encouraging words. You make me what to polish it up and let it shine.
DeleteVery mystical.
ReplyDeletewell dragons are mystical...
DeleteAw, come on. He probably just wants to get in her panties. ;)
ReplyDeletehaha - now that made me laugh...
DeleteThis is beautiful. I feel this exact same way about beer. Also, I guess my wife. :)
ReplyDeletehaha - well hopefully it is a fine crafted beer..I am sure you heart is filled with love for your other half..
Delete"She, the navigator of the stars"....this is such a beautiful poem of love - a mystical union.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend, we need to catch up!
DeleteMagical, mysterious lovers. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteTender, passionate, contained and yet unbound, if that makes sense. Now let's see if I can leave a comment, been having trouble all day.
ReplyDeleteHi Marina,
DeleteYour comment came through fine. Thanks for visiting and trying to leave a comment during a troublesome day. Hope today is better for you :)
I'm here because my dragon radar was alerted
ReplyDeleteglad you found your way with that radar...
DeleteJust don't tell her where that thing is located.
Deletehmm...should this worry me Blue?
DeleteBeautiful. You did it again!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gail, how is that dragon of yours doing?
DeleteI absolutely love this. The mysticism is wonderful. It's like reading a story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra..a story perhaps
DeleteBeautifully told...
ReplyDeletethank you
DeleteExquisite write as always :D
ReplyDeleteSanaa - thank you for your visits..
DeleteFrom one storyteller to another, hey, I dig your fragmented glance into the heart of something larger & more complex. What a concept, to be in love with a fire dragon; the height of daring fantasy & myth & legend. And, gosh, thanks again for being one of the most fervent fans of my BLACKTHORNE series.
ReplyDeleteHi Glenn,
DeleteWell, there is nothing wrong with a bit of storytelling. I do enjoy your BLACKTHORNE series and I will continue to read each segment. I always check on open link to see if you have one posted even if I am not participating.
connected through
ReplyDeletea mystical realm
bonded by love
Great ending Truedessa! How blessed they can get where love is shared most lovingly!
Hank
Hey Hank,
DeleteWhere have you been at the cat's mat? Suza is squeezing in at number 1.
I like your opening lines - dramatic and magical. :-)
ReplyDelete~Imelda
Very beautiful and imaginative use of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, it sort of wrote itself...
DeleteSymbolic and balanced, excited and mysterious, breath taking stories, legend like - very cool, True!
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks humbird, really appreciate your words.
DeleteHave a good weekend, True;)
ReplyDeleteThanks and you too!
DeleteIt is quite lovely prose.
ReplyDeletethank you Ann...
Delete"she | the navigator of the stars... I love it, True Blue. How are you?
ReplyDeleteHi Blue - navigating the stars, the constellations twinkle with delight...How are you Blue tell me true?
DeleteExhausted. That about sums it up. Otherwise it's all good.
DeleteBlue, you work too hard and need some rest and so do I..
DeleteA visit to a magical place: your imagination!
ReplyDeleteYes, my imagination seems to take flight and I am never sure where it will go...
DeleteHappy Saturday, True:) I'm looking forward to your next mystical poem story.
ReplyDeletei need to visit this magical land you speak of.
ReplyDeleteso atmospheric and mysterious.