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I open my ears so I might hear
the songs of the willow flute
all my troubles seem to disappear
hidden in the rifts of a golden lute
come, my love let us drift away
into a sea of sweet ecstasy
harmony is only a dream away
together composing our destiny
I open my ears so I might hear
the songs of the willow flute
our words, a
collection of lyrics
spoken from the inner heart
energizing our emerging spirit
romanticism an evolving art
come, my love let us drift away
into a sea of sweet ecstasy
harmony is only a dream away
together composing our destiny
hidden in the riffs of a golden lute
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come, my love let us drift away is the perfect lyric to a timeless song of love.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Thank you for your lovely comment!
DeleteThis made me want to dance. The perfect Rhythm to create a wonderful love song
ReplyDeleteSmiling, please feel free to dance on carefree feet!
Deletecome, my love let us drift away
ReplyDeleteinto a sea of sweet ecstasy
Can never go wrong there! Great word-craft, True!
Hank
Thanks Hank
Deletethe poetry tank!
Hank!
DeleteHi Truedessa - that's what I want to find right now:
ReplyDeleteI open my ears so I might hear
the songs of the willow flute
all my troubles seem to disappear
hidden in the rifts of a golden lute
Wonderful poem ... excellent ... "just dissolve into the song of the willow flute" ... cheers Hilary
The willow flute takes me away , lost in song
DeleteThe willow flute is something that makes me warm.
ReplyDeleteMe too Bjorn
DeleteYour poetry IS music!
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind Alex! Thank you
DeleteThis one sure would make a great tune as lovers swoon.
ReplyDeleteA tune that plays in a dreamers head
DeleteYour poem is so light and airy, Truedessa, and I can hear the music in your words! It reminds me a little of Christopher Marlowe's 'A Passionate Shepherd to his Love'.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim I think I was inspired by the whispers of more than one muse!
DeleteKim, I wanted to say I found the poem by Christopher Marlowe - Truly beautiful I had never read it before. Thank you for sharing.
DeleteLovely...somehow as I read this I have echoes of 'Yesterday' by Lennon/McCartney whispering to me.
ReplyDeleteI can hear those sweet whispers of yesterday as well.
DeleteSigh. How Romantic! "Come, my love, let us drift away." Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI guess I am a hopeless romantic
DeleteSo lovely & lyrical. I adore the music of the willow flute, especially Native American songs/prayers. Your romantic word smithing has lightened my day, as snow has come to the Northwest.
ReplyDeleteGlenn snow is headed my way this weekend, blanketing the earth in silent softness
DeleteA very romantic lyrical poem.
ReplyDeleteAll we need is a guitar.
(the lute and flute are the hearts of lovers)
Enters the guitar to offer some rhythm
DeleteThanks Martin for your gentle words
Truly beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI want to hear more of the flute...lovely rhythm and repetition!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lynn, the flute is magical...
DeleteGorgeousness overload!!❤️💜
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteGorgeous! I'm sure you must have had a melody in your head as you wrote this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bryan, perhaps I did :-)
DeleteVery late to the reading, apologies. Was cavorting over the extended weekend with my grandchildren.
ReplyDeleteDo love your take on the prompt...it's almost lilting. And the refrains add that much more musical energy to it. Lovely!