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she is a huntress in the night
under the glow of blue moonlight
intuitive, tracking wild dreams
following songs of ancient streams
dark shadows, hiding beyond sight
she is a huntress in the night
her heart pounds to the water drum
catching the rhythm as crickets hum
in primal tongue, she sings for him
awaken my love hear my hymn
she is a huntress in the night
enchantment is ours, hold on tight
come with me, in a hidden cave
let's satisfy the dream we crave
tangled with him, she finds delight
she is a huntress in the night
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Love this.. what magic in such a hunt... night has a magic.
ReplyDeleteThank Bjorn, the dreamscape can be magical.
DeleteOh this is beautiful....I can feel her Energy!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry! How are you my friend?
DeleteI can feel her wild energy and picture the glow of blue moonlight!❤️
ReplyDeletePerhaps, she travels on a different frequency in the night.
DeleteMost men would say she could hunt them anytime.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, they would I don't really know.
DeleteA hunt that wouldn't last long as she grabs on strong and any guy plays along.
ReplyDeleteI don't think she is seeking just any guy? She is a huntress of a dream
Delete... "following the songs of ancient streams" ... This is enchanting from beginning to end, and in my favorite rhyming cadence as well!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I thought the form would work well for the message.
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteI really, really hope her hunts are successful.
Thank EC - I guess only the dreamer knows.
DeleteI really like the story progressing through the lines, and the way in which your rhyme adds to the sensual magic of the tale.
ReplyDeleteThanks Magaly
DeleteWhoa! Good thing I'm 70 and no longer prey, they say the meat is tough :-) That was very good so now i think I'll keep my door unlocked : )
ReplyDeleteGood write T.
ZQ
ZQ ~ your comment made me smile. Thank you!
DeleteThe huntress in the night is seductive in her rhyme:)
ReplyDeleteha - that she is...
DeleteLove this, the chosen words, the symbolism, the huntress, the catch. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for visiting Myrna and leaving your thoughts.
DeleteThank you for feeling the mythical tone.
ReplyDeleteLove this seductive poem. The rhyme turnaround was very clever.
ReplyDeleteThank you Marin, I used the Quatern form for this piece and dreams are seductive in many ways :)
Delete"Martin" so sorry ...
DeleteGorgeous poem! I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ayala!
DeleteLovely and mystical. Wonderful cadence. And once again, a stellar job with the repetition. I enjoyed reading this piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Wendy, I always appreciate your visits and comments.
DeleteDeliciously, fantastically romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary!
DeleteHow beautiful it is to read this, I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Old Egg..
DeleteI love how effortlessly this poem flows - like a song
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae Rose for hearing a melody..
DeleteI love how primal this is, while also being so mystical and dreamy. Any man is lucky to have a good woman hunt after him.
ReplyDeleteSmiling...primal it may be filled with some mystical fantasy of sorts.
Deletetangled with him, she finds delight
ReplyDeleteshe is a huntress in the night
One will always be bothered by dreams which in most cases run counter to what one wants and expect!
Hank
hmm, I am not sure Hank, the world rotates clockwise and spins counterclockwise, so I am not sure which way she might be going in this poem.
DeletePurely beautiful and magical! Love!!! You are an amazing writer Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Trudessa. It speaks to my pagan roots!
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