Sunday, August 23, 2020

Zero Lattitude

Art by helldivo at DeviantArt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I perceive the world through mystical eyes

let us sail across the sea, our imaginary line

mapping a place of treasure for you and I

setting our coordinates, searching for  signs

 

let us sail across the sea, our imaginary line

you are the tempest storm, I am the calm

setting our coordinates, searching for signs

together riding waves, our healing balm

 

you are the tempest storm, I am the calm

my eyes have beheld an oasis of pleasure

together riding waves, our healing balm

our hearts beating with erratic measure

 

my eyes have beheld an oasis of pleasure

sing me a song under the crescent moon

our hearts beating with erratic measure

kiss me slowly, with your honey dip tunes

 

sing me a song under the crescent moon

mapping a place of treasure for you and I

kiss me slowly, with your honey dip tunes

I perceive the world through mystical eyes

 

linking with The Sunday Muse

http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2020/08/sunday-muse-122.html

 

Author's note:  Thank you for your  visits! I had a couple of dreams

this week about maps. My mind is swirling with adventure today.

Maps, dreams & vision

 

13 comments:

  1. One the storm, one the calm, a perfect combination! Good read.

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  2. Well done! A mystical voyage through the map of form.

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  3. This is like a poetic song Truedessa! A beautiful voyage of two!

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  4. I love "you are the tempest storm, I am the calm." This does read with all the rhythm and rhyme of a song.......beautiful, True.

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  5. A beautiful journey of two souls in sinc. Happy Sunday. Be Safe. Thanks for dropping by my blog today

    Much💝love

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  6. A nice form for sing-song reading poetry. I am glad you got back to those "mystical eyes." One should travel with high expectations, as if your evading is to a bucket list place. We do that a lot, have to keep updating the bucket list.
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  7. An enchanting voyage! Enjoyed the shifting descriptions and the sway of the words.

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  8. Off on a grand adventure! Reminds me of the adventures of Pat and Truedessa. Miss those.

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  9. A love poem for travelers of the heart, who of course, are always searching for buried treasure and new lands to explore. Very musical, as others have mentioned, and for me, dream-like. Loved it, especially that very last stanza, so rich with 'honey-dripped tunes.'

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  10. A perfect form for this romantic, wandering poem.

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  11. A most stupendous pantoum. Lovely and it just flows .....

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  12. Sure a journey that is well worth exploring again and again.

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  13. Not a good year for traversing maps and world, though...

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