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| courtesy of Pixabay |
Arrival of the full Sturgeon Moon
fish swimming in deep water
stirring the bottom for a meal
leaping to the surface, hope rises
a fisherman waits with baited breath
for the catch of a lifetime
written for dVerse writing the Cherita hosted by Merril
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The chain of life beautifully portrayed.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely cherita, Truedessa. There is something mystical about this scene, like something magical is about to happen.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, Truedessa. I like how you brought the story from the fish to the fisherman.
ReplyDeleteClever! I like the punning of 'baited'.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully captured, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteWonderful 🙌
ReplyDeleteYou've created such a vivid magical scene! Beautifully captured! I can almost imagine it as the start of a fairy tale.
ReplyDeleteCircle of life - both need to eat.
ReplyDeleteLove the hope rising for the fisherman. Beautiful sturgeon moon.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is like a movie scene - suspenseful and dramatic.
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteAh, the word baited works beautifully here!!! Thank you for leaving me a comment.
ReplyDeleteA cycle of life. I love it!
ReplyDeleteFishing by the moon.... that is execellent
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