Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Love Letters for dVerse June 4, 2013



Awake in crumpled sheets
wafer thin, fragile cry
writing love letters from my heart
where to start, where to end
black ink drips from  a leaky  pen
how do I express all that's within

teary eyes, I slip into a dream
you are hovering in the wings
to ease my tormented soul
gently plucking my heartstrings
warm kisses , our tongues ignite
increasing the tempo of desire

dark hours, ours bodies entwined
quivering to the rhythm of the night
even if it is just a figment of my mind
waltzing on the edge of insanity
you take my hand,  humming in my ear
an enchanted melody...

passions mounting, a fountain of love
overflowing basin from deep within
intoxicating drink makes my head spin
shameless , my soul in nakedness sings
a rush of pleasure, surely this cannot be a sin

falling
       falling
            falling

into a magical dream-scape
tranquility embraced in your arms
whispering your name in the misty air
luminous eyes, I behold a new horizon
if this is a dream please wake me not
drifting  back into a lucid state

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    1. Charles,

      Thank you so much for the visit and words.

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  2. Aww... this brought tears to my eyes. So touching.

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  3. smiles....here is to hoping that life is always such a dream that we never need wake from....write those love letters into reality...smiles....

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    1. Brian,

      Well, I am a dreamer so wake me not..smiling..

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  4. Beautiful, Truedessa. The idea of love letters makes my heart sing.

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    1. Hi Mary,

      Thanks for the comment..I wonder if anyone still writes actual love letters.

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    2. Good morning... given technology today, they are probably love emails and love twitters... :op

      Love letters used to be the thing, however. I'm sure it's a lost art.

      Thank you for stopping by my place! :o)

      I will return!!

      ~shoes~

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    3. Hi Red Shoes,

      Thanks for visiting..I think you are right about love emails and tweets..it is an electronic world..a lost art perhaps, but at least the words are not a lost art as they reside in the heart..something to ponder..

      I was more than happy to visit your place..interesting place you have going.

      Hope to see you soon..

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    4. Wherever I go, I notice tracks that I swear I've seen before.
      Could it be professor Shoes is knocking at your door? :)

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    5. Hi Blue,

      Working on something special just for you!

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    6. The suspense is driving me insane.
      Whatever it is, it had better not be rain ;)

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    7. Hi Blue,

      I'll try to refrain from any rain..wouldn't want you to go insane. Have a great day!

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  5. This is lovely ~ I specially like:

    tranquility embraced in your arms

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  6. Truedessa, gorgeous descriptions here. Very nice write.

    Pamela

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    1. Pamela,

      Thank you for the read and nice comment.

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  7. So with your stream
    You are entranced in a dream?
    A love letter to it
    That is sure a hit
    Findings such arms
    That raise no alarms
    Would sure be the way
    To brighten ones bay
    But instead the dreams go bust
    Or wither away and rust
    If I only had a buck
    For each time i'd have a big truck lol
    That just popped out
    Care to have a trout?

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    1. Hi Pat,

      I've told you I'm a dreamer
      and sometimes a screamer
      one needs to find a way
      to keep the dream alive
      at least one has to try
      care to have a trout..(lol)
      if you're cooking I'll try it out...

      see you in the dream world
      where we can make our cash
      I'm glad you forgot about
      that other plan..something
      about cat burglar..(laughing)




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    2. I never forget about the plan
      Actually came up with a new one I'm a fan
      But a bit underhanded I suppose
      So I will file it away in my criminal rows
      A screamer you say?
      My not shy at your bay hahahaha
      Think I'd let that go?
      here at you show

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    3. I was hoping you would forgot that plan
      but, now it seems you have a new one
      in your land, will the cat have lots
      of white sand, to squish between his toes
      best you leave the screamer thing alone
      or I will come to your shore and rant..

      (laughing) have a great day at your bay...



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    4. Psssssst Pat... She's working on something special just for me. Doesn't that want to make you eat kitty litter haha

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  8. If this IS a dream, it's a much nicer one than what I wrote about! Great rhythm, beautifully done!

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    1. Thank you Nico, nice of you to visit...

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  9. This drips with passion, longing and emotion. Nicely done Truedessa.

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    1. Hello,

      Thank you for the lovely comment.

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  10. There is an element of surprise in this for me because you've written a sensitive love poem, yet it is crisscrossed with dark images. I like that!

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    1. Thank you for the nice comment. I think with every dream there is a mixture of emotions.

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  11. Yup! Trudessa, you sure evoke here a time of passion...is the word "unbridled". I remember when I dropped the reins, and my horse WAS unbridled. It is then I found the meaning of the word. --grin!
    PEACE!

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    1. Steve,

      Nice to see you again! "unbridled" I like that descriptive word - wild and free spirit..

      peace to you as well...

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  12. The challenge in writing a letter to capture all the joy of love can be as difficult as capturing a dream - I like how your first stanza starts. I hope you got it down in that letter :-)

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    1. Letters can be hard to write even with the best intentions..thank you for visiting and the nice comment.

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  13. Dear Truedessa,
    I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award! Congratulations on having such an awesome voice. If you need more details, check this link http://listeningdaisy.wordpress.com/2013/06/05/im-considered-a-beloved-blog-i-got-the-liebster/

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    1. I accept the nomination and will post my response this weekend when I have a bit more time. Thank you for thinking of my blog.

      http://listeningdaisy.wordpress.com/

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  14. ah - there are dreams we def. wouldn't mind to stay for a bit..smiles...but this sounds like it's dreamy reality..so even better...smiles

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    1. Thank you so much Claudia..ah to dream one's self into the realm of reality...

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  15. So many images to consider in this piece...

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    1. Thank you for seeing the images.

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  16. Evocative, tender and very moving. A great tribute to the immense power of love.

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    1. James,

      Always nice to have you visit with your lovely comments.
      Thank you and have a great day!

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  17. did like the effects of the falling lines

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    1. Thank you for the read and the reply..funny, how your posts always come through twice..I guess that is twice as nice to see you. Have a great day...

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  18. did like the effects of the falling lines

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  19. Oh, I bet this is delicious when spoken. You should record this one.

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    1. Thank you, I've been thinking of doing a few recordings.

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    1. ayala,

      Thank you friend..have a good day!

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