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dVerse Tueday March 19, 2013















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Lavender Fields

In the predawn my spirit restless
seeking you in the meadow of light
whispering pines sway in the breeze
I recall a time a picture in my mind

My ears tuning in a beautiful hymn
a  voice flowing freely in the air
my body warms to a rising sun
I recall a song a melody in my heart

Silent moments in a distant horizon
we sat on the brink of endless devotion
intertwined in the hands of time
I recall a love beyond forever

We felt each other
       felt everything
             felt nothing..
lost in the world we built, forever spinning...

You were mine and I was yours
in a field of lavender dreams
captivated by your sweet aroma
I recall the lingering hints of pleasure

My spirit flew within your embrace
soaring,  high in an azure sky
songs drifting in the winds of change
I recall a flight of two souls

Our eyes met in another realm
searching for a deeper meaning
to this life we live, the love we share
I recall a vision in an orange sunset

We felt each other
       felt everything
            felt nothing..
lost in the world we built, forever spinning...







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38 comments:

  1. ClaudiaMarch 19, 2013

    nice...you paint with warm colors here...love the field of lavender dreams...

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  2. WolfsrosebudMarch 19, 2013

    so sad things can come to an end, but what beauty they can remember

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Wolfrosebud, your words are so true..thank you!

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  3. VictoriaMarch 19, 2013

    I like how you use the lavender fields to express the emotions of this poem. There is a lavender farm near my home in Reno and the scents, the hum of bees...it's magical!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Victoria,

      Thank you..I do love the lavender scent..

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  4. brudbergMarch 19, 2013

    Wonderful poetry and lavenderfields are so beautiful too.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Brudberg,

      Thanks so much for your kind comment.

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 19, 2013

    smiles..beautiful love poem...i came ona field of lavender one day while i was hiking...was beautiful...and over powering in smell but i let out my hands and ran them through it as i walked through....love that lost in the moment feel in this as well...

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Hi Brian,

      Thank you for the comment..I can visualize you walking through the field reaching for the moment..so carefree..

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  6. GraceMarch 19, 2013

    Like the romantic write of lavender dreams ~ Nice to see you at OLN ~

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Hi Grace,

      Thanks for hosting tonight and the kind reply..

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  7. Pat HattMarch 19, 2013

    Very romantic at your sea
    As Lavender shines through from three
    Lost is such a state as one
    Is a find fate under any sun

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Hi Pat,

      So glad you came through for a view..
      always a pleasure to have you at my sea..

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  8. mrs mediocrityMarch 19, 2013

    This was such a sensual read filled with smells and romance, lovely

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    1. TruedessaMarch 19, 2013

      Hello,

      Thanks you for the kind reply and I'm glad you could smell the fragrance within the words.

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  9. ayalaMarch 19, 2013

    Sensual and beautiful piece!

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  10. MaryMarch 19, 2013

    Just love the thought of 'lavendar dreams.' Beautifully expressed....

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      Mary,

      thank you for your kind thoughts..

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  11. AnonymousMarch 19, 2013

    A sweet romantic poem- and lavender dreams - just beautiful - K

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      Thank you for reading my work and your comment. It is appreciated.

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  12. AnonymousMarch 19, 2013

    I love the lines "felt everything, felt nothing"-- for me, it is when you can allow yourself to be with someone and just..feel...nothing, and that is okay, then that is all you need, everything, and nothing. ~peace, Jason

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      Jason,

      Thanks you for dropping by and leaving a comment. I agree there is a sense of peace even in stillness. I wanted to tell you I like your pictures and perhaps, sometime you will allow me to write something about one of them..peace..

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  13. Ginny BrannanMarch 20, 2013

    Such lovely imagery, written in a way that is almost lyrical. Nice.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      Hi Ginny,

      Originally, I had a song in mind when I started writing this but, the pen moved more into a poem..so that is where it brought me. Thank you for your reply.

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  14. James RainsfordMarch 20, 2013

    Some arresting imagery here and clearly a deeply felt experience.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      James,

      Thank you so much for your comment it does bring an image to mind within my heart.

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  15. AnonymousMarch 20, 2013

    This is beautiful, sensuous and romantic. May I suggest one small alteration?

    In this line:

    'My spirit flew within your embrace
    soaring, high in a blue azure sky'

    the word 'blue' is redundant. I would remove it and change 'a' to 'an'. I think you'll find it helps the ryhthm too.

    Tony

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    1. TruedessaMarch 20, 2013

      Hi Tony,

      Thanks for the lovely comment and the catch. I agree this needed to be changed so I changed it pronto. Thank you for the feedback. Always appreciated.

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  16. Tracy Kuhn GreenleeMarch 21, 2013

    This is an amazing poem...beautiful and true.. knowing the connection that can occur between two souls and living it even if it feels as a dream...thank you

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    1. TruedessaMarch 21, 2013

      Tracy,

      Thank you for the kind words..I am glad you could feel my words and the connection of two souls in the field of dreams..

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  17. Marbles in My PocketMarch 21, 2013

    This could be a beautiful song! A wonderful write!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 21, 2013

      Hi Charles,

      Thanks so much for coming over for a read..always nice to see you here.

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  18. kaykualaMarch 21, 2013

    Such a wonderful write, Truedessa! I've always liked purple as a colour! What more with rows upon rows of lavender! Nicely!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaMarch 21, 2013

      Hi,

      Thanks you for the nice comment it is always appreciated in my realm.

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  19. AnonymousMarch 23, 2013

    "I recall the lingering hints of pleasure" sigh.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 23, 2013

      darkangelwrites,

      Thanks for reading my work and the reply..yes, lingering hints of pleasure are always sweet.

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