Friday, March 8, 2013

Half Past Two!




With my eyes,  when I sleep
half past  two, I dream of you
in an  infinite universe...so deep

flying the sky ways, lost and alone
my thoughts no longer my own
I dream, I dream of you..

Am I dreaming my life away
or is my life caught in a dream
I stream a lover's scene...

I see a vision before my eyes
a love so intense it makes me cry
two souls tango in a night sky

orbiting around silver stars
cohesive in thoughts
body and mind

 slipping into your arms
I find my peace, I find my calm
drifting off to sleep..

8 comments:

  1. Nice place to sleep
    Can sure sleep deep
    When you find your peace
    And the thoughts cease

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    1. Hi Pat,

      Thanks so much for stopping by
      and leaving such a nice reply!

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  2. There is a balance in this poem that makes it so easy on the eyes and mind. It's beautiful. Touching. There is some irony in the piece. You write with a great deal of comfort, but there is a touch of distance and pain...I love your writing.

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    1. Jessica,

      Thank you for dropping in to read my work. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and I am so glad you enjoy my poetry.

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  3. no where better to find that sense of calm than in a lovers arms...and two tangoing...well that is some fine play as well...smiles...hope you have a wonderful weekend...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Thanks so much for dropping in always nice to see you here. I hope you have a great weekend as well.

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  4. In crystal waters my visions become clear....
    ivory towers slowly disappear
    grains of sand slipping through my fingers
    memories of you linger
    to you I will always wave
    hello

    Life can be cruel as it's interesting! The loved one is always there to be remembered though the road remains bumpy! That's how I read this! Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. kaykuala,

      I thank you for the comments. I think you meant to put this under Mystery of the sea..but, no worries as I appreciate the comment no matter where it is posted. thanks again...

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