Saturday, March 16, 2013

dverse The Cinquain - little late for the show..

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black rose
sharp thorns of love
soft alluring beauty
haunting memories within lips
touch me

14 comments:

  1. I'll have to do some research on black rose symbolism. Pain, beauty, and longing--that is quite the cocktail. Intense.

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    1. Jessica,

      Thanks for the comment..well that would be me...a mixture of emotions..the ultimate rose is the elusive blue rose..perhaps, I will write a follow up "Blue Rose"
      thanks for the visit always nice to see you here...

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  2. Love the ppoem AND the picture! Very nice post!

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    1. Charles, I am always happy to see you here and to visit your place of dwelling..thanks for the comment..

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  3. wow...very nice...the black rose itself...and the symbolism...really like the closure as well the stand alone touch me....the second to last line sets it up so well...very nice...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Waving at you! Nice as always to read your response..thank you so much it is always appreciated in my house..

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  4. Such a haunting rose, sure strikes a pose, great depiction from you, indeed great lines through and through.

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    1. Pat,

      Thanks so much for the kind reply...

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  5. there's a hint of underlying danger in this... very effectively done...

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  6. A lot of symbolism in the black rose ~ Very well done on the form ~

    You can link this for OpenLinkNight on Tuesday if you like ~

    Wishing you Happy Weekend ~

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    1. Hi Grace,

      Thanks for the comment..I'll think about linking this one on Tuesday.

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  7. That's a fabulous cinquain - not sure how I missed it.

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    1. Hi,

      Thanks so much! I am glad you enjoyed..

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