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Snow White
Cast into the streets, marksman by her side
his hand on a gun , she flees for her life
she finds a condo on the other side of town
seven little men take her in, whom she would tend
seven little men take her in, whom she would tend
Grumpy, tired of working long hours
Sleepy, suffers from insomnia
Bashful , attending assertiveness training
Happy , a musician full of heart
Doc , busy with patients all day
Dopey , enrolled back in school
Sneezy , suffers from allergies
Mirror, Mirror on the wall who's the fairest of them all
Snow White, pure
beauty white as snow
a queen with an attitude, wanted her gone
devised a plan, a
gift tainted chocolates
Snow White's one weakness sweets, she eats
wicked queen screamed
with delight
no one messes with me, I am royalty
seven little men find their friend
call 911 paramedics on the run
Dashing doctor to her rescue
mouth to mouth resuscitation
kiss of life, Snow White breathes again
cops fast on the wicked queen's trail
seems she wanted in several states
locked her up in jail, sorry no bail
there she wailed for a plastic surgeon
Snow White married Doctor Right
with seven bridesmen at her side
vows of love, under city lights..
Author's Note : A twist of the pen on this one as I had to go outside the box for Mary's dVerse challenge.
Happy Easter & Happy Spring!
Happy Easter & Happy Spring!
Brought her into this day in age
ReplyDeleteRight of the page
With the allergy guy and all
Sneezing at the wedding hall
Pat,
DeleteYou are first again! Thanks for the visit in this modernized world.
Love it.. Really a lot of funny details here.
ReplyDeleteBrudberg,
DeleteThanks so much for the comment. This was a fun prompt..
...aww... a real modernized version i would say... ha.. i like that despite of the twists you incorporated here the real story didn't really lost its essence & value but rather increases the quality of entertainment so to fit in the tastes of modern generation of readers... i genuinely enjoyed your take... it's not at all boring to read... ok... another favorite here... excellent... smiles...happy easter...
ReplyDeleteKelvin,
DeleteThanks for the visit and your kind thoughts are always appreciated.
Happy Easter!
mouth to mouth resuscitation...ha...and the queen wanted in multiple states...too funny...you def modernized well but stuck true to the story as well....very cool....
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteGlad you had a laugh this one was fun to create..interesting prompt in a modern world.
I love it! It's so fun to imagine these characters in our "modern" society!
ReplyDeleteCharles,
DeleteSo, glad you enjoyed the revised story..it makes for interesting imagery for sure..thanks again!
I laughed out loud several times during this read! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting..glad I could make you laugh this morning.
DeleteYou brought the characters right up to date - and you didn't forget to give us a happy ending :-)
ReplyDeleteHi,
DeleteThanks for the reply and happy endings are always nice!
that was a fun read...cool take on the story and love how you translated it into our century...so glad she found dr. right...smiles
ReplyDeleteClaudia,
DeleteThanks for the read a modern day Snow White with her Dr. Right is always nice.
Very clever twist! Loved the idea of the Wicked Queen being wanted in several states and Snow White and Dr. Right getting married with the seven bridesmen standing up! What fun.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary,
DeleteNice prompt had fun with this one!
So fun to read ~ I do like the modern twist, at least a happy ending with Dr. Right ~ Happy Sunday ~
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
DeleteGlad you found this one fun as I was aiming for that modern twist. Thank you!
Ha! A lot of fun here! I'm glad she found the right guy - and doctor. K.
ReplyDeleteHi,
DeleteThanks glad you had fun in Snow White's modern world.
I love the descriptions of the dwarves!
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteGlad you enjoyed the little background on those seven men.
Thank you for reading and the reply!