photo by TheFoxAndTheRaven
The Rain!
You pushed me away
when I wanted to
stay
if you wanted me
to go
why didn't you
just say so
I gave you my heart
I gave you my soul
whispers of love
into the night..
I sit drenched in
a pouring rain
feeling raw and
full of pain
if you wanted me
to go
why didn't you
just say so
somehow I'll see
it through
hope you find your
way
letting go
difficult to do
in the wake of a
new day
This is heart wrenching and beautiful..
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and leaving a comment..I tried to capture what I felt in the pic.
DeleteCan be a hard thing to grasp, but a positive view can get one past. Very nicely spun under your sun.
ReplyDeleteHi Pat,
DeleteThanks for spinning by..always nice!
the ache of your heart shades each word. lovely & melancholy.
ReplyDeleteHi Paige,
DeleteThanks for the note!
and perhaps they will live to rue the day...smiles...
ReplyDeleteletting go is not as easy as we make it sometimes...
nice repetition in this as it evokes the feeling
makes it almost lyrical...
Hi Brian,
DeleteThanks for the note! This is a portion of a larger piece of work that really is more of a song..I'm glad you could feel it.
Love is the most heartwrenching, thumb twisting, mind wrecking of emotions...
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteThanks for stopping in and I agree love makes great fodder of thoughts..as with any emotion as it can be felt.
so much emotion in this...
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteThanks for the read and reply..nice to meet you!