Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Love Untamed...



lions
majestic beasts
loud roar, fiery spirit
captured moment of affection
two hearts
 
loyal
wandering free
courageous full of pride
weary displaying gentleness
wild force

grassland
lioness prowls
hunting for survival
primitive desire full belly
content



posted for dVerse 3 cinquains...
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31 comments:

  1. Brian MillerNovember 19, 2013

    i like that first one...it plays well off the pic...and i like the thought of love around the world, regardless of species...i like the soft play on words in the second as well in pride...smiles.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 19, 2013

      Hi Brian,

      I seem to have cats on my mind and saw this picture and it really moved me seeing the beauty of the wild heart...

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 19, 2013

    You have captured them so beautifully. Sigh. I adore lions.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 19, 2013

    Really good cinquains. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  4. Pat HattNovember 19, 2013

    The cat likes that
    One big cat
    Although they'd probably eat you and me
    So let's let them love free
    Well we slowly back away
    A fully belly we don't want to make at their bay

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    1. TruedessaNovember 19, 2013

      I thought you might like that
      two beautiful cats at my mat
      but, these we will admire from afar
      under a sky filled with twinkling stars

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    2. Pat HattNovember 19, 2013

      Sounds good to me
      Lets be up high to or on the sea
      We'll watch from the ship
      And throw some catnip

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    3. TruedessaNovember 19, 2013

      We'll watch from our ship
      two joined at the hip
      continuing on our trip

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  5. ayalaNovember 19, 2013

    Beautiful!

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  6. steveroniNovember 19, 2013

    Cats will always be cats.
    Poets will always be poets, some really good, some still trying.
    You, True, are WAY "above average"...
    --Cat Man
    ("P & L" no longer means Profit and Loss!)

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    1. TruedessaNovember 19, 2013

      Hi Steve,

      I always enjoy reading your comments..you are too kind my friend..
      and I am laughing so glad P & L no longer means Profit and Loss..
      too funny really...

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  7. MaryNovember 19, 2013

    I like all three of these, Truedessa. Together they give a three-dimensional picture of these majestic animals.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Thanks Mary, always appreciate your comments.

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  8. Vandana SharmaNovember 19, 2013

    A beautiful way to show the tender side of a symbol that is considered rough and tough.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Thank you..well they need to be tough in their environment but, can be tender to their own...

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  9. ricardo alves / são paulo,brasilNovember 20, 2013

    like this idea and movement!

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Ricardo,

      So nice to see you friend..any chance of another collaboration? Thanks for visiting...

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  10. ClaudiaNovember 20, 2013

    aren't they majestic indeed... and the tenderness in all their wildness and strength and power..

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Claudia there is something regal about them...

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  11. kaykualaNovember 20, 2013

    Appreciation of something wild and fierce is not out of turn. But they are certainly gentle to their own kind! Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Hi Hank,

      Thanks for the kind words...:-)

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  12. Maude LynnNovember 20, 2013

    I love that first one!

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  13. Jennifer WagnerNovember 20, 2013

    Lions do have the air of the majestic! That first one works perfectly with your title and I really like the third one too.

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    1. TruedessaNovember 20, 2013

      Thank you so much it seems cats have been symbolic in my life lately...

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  14. brudbergNovember 20, 2013

    The combination of cinquains are majestic indeed... Love the tie to the picture..

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  15. AnonymousNovember 20, 2013

    You captured the lion's character in your poem. :-) Also, you have achieved in writing about the power and madness of love in this piece.

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